Reviews for Taking a Stand |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It took a while to get there, but justice has been served. Described in a manner that I was impatient to push along; but such is life as people are usually reluctant to 'upset the applecart' or think outside the box. I wonder about the inclusion of Death-Eaters as Aurors and Healers in the story, but it is possible that volde could actually care about the next generation beyond the offspring of his followers . . . and what better way to keep tabs on his nemesis ? |
![]() ![]() Lean how and when to use an apostrophe please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun one-shot! A bit long and I think chapters would help keep track of where the reader is but that's just nit-picking. I enjoyed reading! Thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() Learn how to use the chaptering feature you insipid troglodyte! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really excellent, and in dire need of a sequel ;). |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Outstanding I agree the Dark would have done somethong. No guarantee she would exclude their kids. As it was, things became a bloodbath |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story, well written and a joy to read, giving hope that there can be a better world. Reaching out to Draco was a Slytherin move, reaching out to the Dark Lord inspired and unexpected! I liked how love of children came through via Miranda, Gran Longbottom, Lucius, especially the Aurors! Loved showing another dimension of Aurors as parents. Glad to see healers truly being Healers. Glad to see Minerva feel guilty. Enjoyed the story. Thank you for writing. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like it when Harry acts like a right-thinking person should. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a brilliant little example of the Butterfly Effect. I'm hopeful that the author has written more in this universe. There is certainly enough to continue with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is perfect example of what they call the butterfly effect :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, wish there was more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for your fabulous story! I'm so glad that Sirius was saved and that Harry escaped Dumbledore and the Dursleys. Excellent story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good! Thank you a lot for writing it! |