the pairing tags are a lie if you are reading this btw.

pairings at the end ruined it lol. the tags are a lie.
started strong, weakened in the mid and should have just ended with voldi being defeated. or shifted the timeline so the pariings happened b4 hand. just seems like the second half of the story was just there for this shitty ending. and the werid kill your teachers scene... weird.

Extreme disappointment Hermione ended up with Ron. I can't even picture it being a thing in the first place.

It actually seriously soured the enjoyment of the story being hit with that at the end. Didnt even finish reading beyond that part.

This is a great story. One bit of confusion is why he doesn't transfer the soul pieces to other objects and spare the artifacts. Especially the diadem.

Found this a fun read. Unique take on the power he knows not.

Loved the story, hated the ending. There was already a foundation for Hermione and Susan to join Luna and Harry but nope. Still a 10/10, just personally didn’t feel the end was worth it especially after all the drama and everything.

Fabulous, that’s another day spent reading. I have got to take a break. Have loved living in these fictional re-telling. My appreciated thanks.

I enjoyed it for the second time, although getting Susan and Hermione with Harry was better IMO... but, that is just me.

It is a nice quick little story. Would recommend

A very enjoyable story.

Nicely done, thanks for writing!

Awe, come on. I want to see him going after Draco and Pansy for the attacks. An AU MUST READ!

oh come on of course Hermione would know about Star Trek and Spock she would know about mind-melding!

Nice story with some brilliant ideas.

Great story!