Really hoping you continue this fic

so is this story dead or something?

Wow, this is amazing!

Going for the ino route as a reincarnated 12 year old is bold as hell. I did not hate this at all though, i will now consider all isekai gods as truck transformers.

Nice start to the story.

Porque no a salido más capitulos?

and the end o_o

not ignore everything mentioned before, the chapter and even the advertisement...just wanted to congratulate you on "hinding in the actual shadow technic" like fr TT_TT it's my first time(in a fic) seeing it used by shikamaru, as it should logically be. Never even saw it in canon(tell me if I'm wrong).
whenever i hear "they can manipulate shadows" first thing i expect them is to hide in said shadow. but apparently Naras can stab, grab, punch, capture and heck even control through their shadows but they can't hide in it ¿?

not ignore everything mentioned before, the chapter and even the advertisement...just wanted to congratulate you on "hinding in the actual shadow technic" like fr TT_TT it's my first time(in a fic) seeing it used by shikamaru, as it should logically be. Never even saw it in canon(tell me if I'm wrong).
whenever i hear "they can manipulate shadows" first thing i expect them is to hide in said shadow. but apparently Naras can stab, grab, punch, capture and heck even control through their shadows but they can't hide in it ¿?

and the end o_o

Very super

I know you only wrote this because someone paid for it, but what was the point in doing literally two chapters? Maybe don't start something if you have no intention of literally ever finishing it without payment. Which is illegal, by the way, in regards to fanfiction.

I love your work, but this is ridiculous and a joke. So much for your moral high ground.

They are 12 slow down

and fuck the detachment thing. I value my life damnit and the moment I suffer from a toe smash in when I realise all of this is real. and I'd go through all the stages of grief. except; maybe never ending anger at the system until the 4th shinobi war.

idc fuck that job. poor Yuri. Asuma. The Warring states period has already passed and the majority of villages would already want to maintain the peace they had. I feel like if people stuck to what they were comfortable with, then there wouldn't be any wars because wars require taking a risk. and yeah, some counties may end up conservative and shit, but he said "Villages" not "Konoha" sooo.

no I just really felt bad for Yuriko.