Reviews for Out of the Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Casey is in immediate proximity and Chuck is trying to figure out how to discreetly get word to Ellie (implicit in that being that Ellie would be discreet in her response)? Not going to be easy for those two. I was hoping Graham might be a bit more helpful. Looking forward to finding out what happens on YnR…I mean finding out if Chuck and Sarah get away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The almost intimate moments are over...Sad. Can't wait to find out how our 2 protagonists will deepen their relationship, with their feelings growing. Maybe during their next stay at the motel. The famous Casey returns to the scene. What role will he play here with Beckman mmmh. A more pronounced war between the NSA and CIA here ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait to see where this story is going, thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Can’t wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lots of good suspense going on here. Hopefully Casey wasn't there to see the car coast back before starting, or he might have considered that suspicious behavior. |
![]() ![]() Mr. Joe I am really enjoying this story. You have done a great job of writing this. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very gripping chapter. Seems both of them are recovering from the events of the past. Chucks last 3 weeks and Sarah's life. Casey found the. What will get him to help them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Well done, turning up the suspense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. We know Casey is a bulldog. It will be interesting to see how Sarah will be able to create some separation again between her and Chuck and the people chasing them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eagerly looking for the next installment. Really want to see how/if/when they can come in from the cold. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an exciting chapter! Really it was all great. Sarah coming to grips with those emotion things, and Chuck blaming himself for everything. Seems pretty much right on target. But obviously a bit of excitement now, I sure will look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great to see that Sarah didn’t just deny her feelings. She doesn’t totally admit what she thinks about Chuck, even to herself, but she’s much closer than canon Sarah. Not surprised about who was after them, but the scene was really well done. Thanks for continuing this great story, Joe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whew, buddy. That was rough. But, it showed each of them that they needed the other. Well done sir. Well done! |