| Reviews for The Survivors |
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   Just William chapter 33 . 6/9 A minor typo, "watched with baited breath", should be "watched with bated breath". Another good chapter. |
| Just William chapter 26 . 6/8 A minor typo, "you married their Astoria", should be "you married there Astoria". |
| Just William chapter 20 . 6/8 A minor typo, "Daphne strode threw the manor", should be, "Daphne strode through the manor". |
| Just William chapter 14 . 6/8 A typo, "felt the pull on her naval", should be "felt the pull on her navel". Good chapter. |
| Just William chapter 7 . 6/7 A minor typo,"effect was slightly lossed", should be "effect was slightly lost". Nice chapter. |
| Just William chapter 6 . 6/7 A couple of repeat typo's, "You get to tell Kinglsey", should be "You get to tell Kingsley" AND "You get to tell Kinglsey", should be "You get to tell Kingsley". Another good chapter. |
| Just William chapter 5 . 6/7 A couple of minor typo's, "please call me Kinglsey", should be "please call me Kingsley" AND "Night is still fairly young Kinglsey", should be "Night is still fairly young Kingsley". An interesting chapter. |
| Just William chapter 3 . 6/7 A minor typo, "Susan would ring my", should be "Susan would wring my". Good chapter. |
| Sujeeth chapter 36 . 4/7 Wonderful story, loved it. |
| zaniarein247 chapter 1 . 2/8 Your story "The Survivors" is a masterpiece waiting to be seen With its rich world compelling characters and gripping plot it deserves more than just words on a page it deserves to be visualized As a commissioned base artist with 3 years of experience I specialize in transforming incredible narratives into stunning comics that captivate audiences Lets collaborate and turn your vision into breathtaking art that speaks to the world Want to see my work Just ask Discord alimaggoon Lets create something unforgettable cant wait to hear from you |
| wkwestbay chapter 27 . 1/24 This Story is Incredible….. Sadness here…. Stunned…. You’re an Awesome Writer… ️ |
| wkwestbay chapter 30 . 1/24 You are Incredible! This Story ROCKS! ️ |
| Sextant chapter 8 . 10/26/2024 Head Auror or Head of the DMLE? They are 2 different positions. |
| Guest chapter 36 . 10/7/2024 Good story and I appreciate the time you took writing it. |
| Thrivean chapter 27 . 9/9/2024 As much as I want to rage about what happened I can understand it if that was your inspriation for writing the story. It breaks my heart because that character was amazingly written, I plan on reading your other completed HP works when I finish this one and I hope that character has the same personality it the other fics |