That was a crummy ending to a half way decent story. It's obvious the fanfiction writer didn't know how to bring their story into Yose. Typical of most fanfiction writers - start off without a good idea and then crash burn not knowing how to take it to a exciting and interesting conclusion. It's such a disappointment. :(

To eh: I was one of members who fairly enjoyed the hinted love connection. It's not like it covers the entire plot. Why don't you keep your weird thoughts to yourself instead of attacking an author? What a weirdo.

Please, you need to stop shoving unnecessary love plots about secondary characters like Akari. This story could have been so much better. The love crap doesn't bring anything to the table. The reader came to read about Hikaru's inner turmoil, not how little Touya jr. thinks how "pretty" she is..lol Is she suppose to be your self insert of something? I don't particularly care about her character or her "relationship" with Waya. In fact, it would have been more interesting if you had dedicated more time spent on Shinji's mother's POV. Too much spotlight on a character who nobody cares about is JUST bad writing. You honestly could have written a separate fic about your little akari self insert instead of shoving it in like a tumor in this one.

hikaru lost? how? I would love to see more. thank you for your hard work

Interesting premise! I enjoyed all the differences it made, though it's rough to see Hikaru so alone and sad. Him opening up to Waya and Touya seems like it would be helpful. Appreciate all the time and work you put into this story, thanks for sharing!

brilliant story, thank you for writing it!

this is absolutely amazing. i don't have the words to describe my admiration for this story.

Intense!

Please update soon

I enjoyed reading this. Thanks!

Please continue, I beg you, it's such a good fic.

niice

please update!

Ah I kind of knew what I was getting into, beginning a story that hasn't been updated in years but I 'm still sad that I'm not going to know how it goes from here.
I liked that you had the gut to make Shindou loose in a match like this! Too bad we're not going to see the result on him and on the story.
Anyway I was still glad for the 14 chapters you've written. It was a really good idea !
I really loved Akari in this (she strikes the nostalgic cord in me :)
I won't lose hope that you might come back to this story one day if you hit a HnG phase XD
Till then good continuation!

you should finish this . It's the third time that i re read this. it s too good too be left alone like this