This is one of my favorite Hikaru no Go stories

This chapter made me cry

Poor Akari, knowing you are going to lose your best friend is hard.

Akari is such a good friend

I can feel his sorrow...

You probably won't continue this but it's incredible so I'm going to read it

I like it already.

one of these das you must return

I think this is not your fault, but the broken lines hurts my eyes...

Due to the enters that are used or generated at the end of each line, the text looks a little fragmented. On my phone I like to read with XL text format (my eyes suck) and likely due to this, the text cuts off in strange places followed by an empty line, which is annoying. Otherwise its a good chapter.

Example(Idk if this shows up correctly):
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Shindou lowered his eyes then to meet Waya's, and for the first time, Waya noticed their color. They

were green, a dull faded green that looked dreamy and distant. "Life's too short not to like people,"
**

Hehe

Where are you?
You made me want to reread the manga.

Seems like a lonely place, where he is. I wanttosee more

Aaah, it's been since I read a dead story. I forgot how it feel when it ends.
Anyway! I really liked it, haha, too bad it was never over but I will live.
Do you still read your review? If you do sorry for the rude reviews you received. Some people are unbelievable... Take care!

I really love this story!

I did not like your Waya. He was mean spirited, a insecure self centered know it all, and where did he get that it was his responsibility or right to lecture or hit Shindou in the name of so called friendship.

Otherwise, I did enjoy your creative alternative universe of Hikaru no Go!