Reviews for Brightly Burning
einargs chapter 3 . 3h
So, it turns out that FFN is either cruel or I made a horrible mistake: the code in my review for chapter 1 (chapter 2 according to FFN) had the equal signs removed. It won't work, I can't edit it, and I can't figure out how to take the review down either.

Apologies!
einargs chapter 2 . 3h
If you're having trouble with the formatting, pull up your browser's console (google it if you aren't sure), paste the following code in, and press enter. It should fix it, though it leaves some of the non-story text messed up (i.e. author's note, credits).

If it doesn't work: try updating your browser or changing to Google Chrome.
If it messes things up even worse: just reload the page. Sorry!

CODE (paste everything below this):
void function(env) {
/ The .storytext class identifies the container for text on FFN
/ Doesn't actually apply the fix
function fixFormatting(elem) {
let lines .split(/\n(?!\n)/g).filter(lineline!"");
let text (" ").replace(/\n\s/g, "\n\n");
return text;
}

/ Turn text with new-lines into paragraph tags (as strings)
function formatWithParagraphs(text) {
return ("\n").map(line"p"line"/p").join("");
}

/ Apply to FFN
function applyFixToFFN() {
let elem (".storytext");
let html formatWithParagraphs(fixFormatting(elem));
html;
}

applyFixToFFN();
}(window);
Steatose chapter 14 . 11/15
I just re read HnG and decide to find a few fics since I didn't want it to end, and as this story is one with the most review on this site, I started reading it a few days ago.
Really well written, and nice AU idea. I'm a bit sad that it was never finished, the story lines was really great, I really enjoyed reading it and I wanted to tell you this.
OTrizy chapter 7 . 11/10
ohh Waya x Akari is for reals in this
Dragon's Shaow chapter 14 . 10/16
Are you still alive? I've read this story at least 1/2 a dozen times and still there's no update...seriously, I'm dying to know the rest of the story! Have some mercy!
StoneTheLoner chapter 11 . 9/28
Frankly this drama and angst is starting to kill my excitement. I wonder if there are more long Go stories like this one?
reanseih chapter 14 . 8/15
I just realized I’m reading a story that hasn’t been updated in 8 years lol. Shame, it’s interesting, would’ve loved to see how Sai would unfold.
Chill chapter 1 . 8/7
I'm
So excited for this!
Anonymous chapter 14 . 6/8
That was a crummy ending to a half way decent story. It's obvious the fanfiction writer didn't know how to bring their story into Yose. Typical of most fanfiction writers - start off without a good idea and then crash burn not knowing how to take it to a exciting and interesting conclusion. It's such a disappointment. :(
Anon chapter 1 . 5/31
To eh: I was one of members who fairly enjoyed the hinted love connection. It's not like it covers the entire plot. Why don't you keep your weird thoughts to yourself instead of attacking an author? What a weirdo.
eh chapter 14 . 5/30
Please, you need to stop shoving unnecessary love plots about secondary characters like Akari. This story could have been so much better. The love crap doesn't bring anything to the table. The reader came to read about Hikaru's inner turmoil, not how little Touya jr. thinks how "pretty" she is..lol Is she suppose to be your self insert of something? I don't particularly care about her character or her "relationship" with Waya. In fact, it would have been more interesting if you had dedicated more time spent on Shinji's mother's POV. Too much spotlight on a character who nobody cares about is JUST bad writing. You honestly could have written a separate fic about your little akari self insert instead of shoving it in like a tumor in this one.
MLeggyLeaf chapter 14 . 4/22
hikaru lost? how? I would love to see more. thank you for your hard work
TheEdifier chapter 14 . 3/14
Interesting premise! I enjoyed all the differences it made, though it's rough to see Hikaru so alone and sad. Him opening up to Waya and Touya seems like it would be helpful. Appreciate all the time and work you put into this story, thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 14 . 11/13/2016
brilliant story, thank you for writing it!
eulysian chapter 14 . 8/19/2016
this is absolutely amazing. i don't have the words to describe my admiration for this story.
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