|Reviews for Blood Dawn|
| Melina M. Zounis chapter 17 . 4/27
I loved this story. Very interesting, except you on your toes, and it was very well thought out. I’m huge fan :)
| SlvrIceDrgn1981 chapter 9 . 11/26/2021
I recently found this gorgeous story and I’m thoroughly enjoying it. However, I’m running across some minor inconsistencies in some paragraphs. There are either words missing or misspelled/misused. For example, the word “quite” is being used in conjunction with “quiet”, when the setting requires a kind of silence or muted suspense.
One other minor infraction is when you go from one POV to another right after without having some break lines to separate them. It can cause the reader to get confused on what POV is being focused on at the moment.
I’m not giving this story negative criticism, just a bit of critique is all. There’s always room for improvement and it’s up to you, if you wish to come back to the story and fix it. Otherwise, your story is truly incredible and keep up the good work and it’ll help you improve.
| ice-rain499 chapter 17 . 5/3/2021
A thrill to read and hard to put down! Congrats on such a cool piece and making it your own interpretation. An interesting concept of combining the past/present for sure! *applause*
| TOSoldtimer chapter 1 . 6/14/2020
Just found this 16 year old gem. I’ve always been fond of Kenshin vampire stories and modern A/Us. This one seems to be off to a very good start.
Belated thanks for writing.
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/16/2019
Great read better ending then the movie.
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/18/2018
I love this story,I would like to read lemon too.
| Rosescarletful chapter 13 . 9/2/2016
Wow, in around the early 2000's you werent alowed to post porn? Huh..
| JasmineDragon22 chapter 17 . 2/19/2016
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/14/2016
So flipping cute! I want to build a fort now
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/22/2016
The last part of the fight scene was kind of confusing. I know the end result of the fight but the order that the last several events happened in wasn't very clear. Do you think you could one day go back over it and try to make it clearer?
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/21/2016
I like this story, but can you fix the italics that started when Kaoru got back to the apartment with Kenshin carrying her?
| Chardinal chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
This is a promising start to what looks to be an intriguing read. I enjoyed this chapter and others of your stories, so thank you for taking the time to write them. I don't mean to be rude, but I have consistently noticed spelling errors in several of your stories, and I understand if you have reasons for leaving them or just don't have the benefit of spelling as a skill. I just wanted to point that out in case no one else had, again, I don't mean to be rude, and am enjoying this story so far.
| silver-nightstorm chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
Ohh, a lovely start! I can't wait to read the rest of this! :D
| vidanime chapter 17 . 2/22/2014
| Creativity at its best chapter 17 . 12/27/2013
i'm upset this story is finished