Find found this fanfiction actually by mistake on Reddit, every hour spend reading it was worth it! Hope to see a new chapter sometime in the future.

This is amazing. I don’t want it to end

RIP Maeglin Yedi you are sorely missed.

Damn, really wish to read more of this story

Please more

please update this amazing story

please update!pleaseplease!please!

Is this finished? It has been a wonderful read.

please write more

I get it now. You're a rape fetishist degenerate that can't write a story without everything leading up to some fucked up romance or other. Why's everyone so god damn progressive? Death eaters reaction to open declarations of love between 2 gay men is exasperation, in a society where they are expected to marry, have heirs, and build upon the family dynasty? No, sorry, death eaters are the fuckers that curse gay lovers as lesser beings, disgraces on the level of blood traitors, ie deserving torture and death. Like, this isn't poorly written but whats with you smutt authors making flimsy ass paper thin characters that are nothing like their canon counterparts? You can't take these unforgivably evil characters and turn them into a bunch of neutrals and romantics. If you're going to do that, it would sell better if you properly changed their characters instead of just taking away from them.

Yeah... what the fuck is your fixation with Stockholm syndrome? In the first place that kinda thing doesn't happen over night. Also, couldn't you skip the raping every once in a while, you can say it has happened without going into detail how it happened... Do you have a rape fetish or something? Seriously disturbed how much you're focusing on something that isn't even integral to the plot.

So I assume this story will be slash at some point given the hints. Would be good to add that to your description.

You should tax by inkom. Not by how rich someonw is. Getting taxfu**ed is stupid

I have to be honest and say that making more magicas for each continents is a bit excessive in my book but this is still a fantastic read! Love it!

Why would the ICW deny them to be their own country because they keep slaves, when the UK does the same?

I ALL Law there is such a thing as "Precidence".

And by allowing ONE country that keeps slaves, they must allow ALL countries that keeps slaves. They can't just pick and choose.

(I'm not even getting into the fact that houselves WANT to be slaves. Even if there are people who can't wrap their head's around that possibly. I've personally known a few people who agree with them, and the BDSM community have a variating degree of agreement on that subject too.

It'd be better to set up some Roman type Laws that yoy aren't allowed to mistreat your slaves. And maybe add something that lets them buy themselves free.

The American slave-trade was unprecedented in their insistence on once-a-slave-always-a-slave. Most other cultures before them that I have read about has had some options for slaves to earn their freedom some way or other.

I believe the founder of the Stoic philosophy (or a direct student of his, but I think it was the founder) was a former slave who had been freed.

I don't see why they don't just do that.

It's pretty cruel to free a whole race who's entire culture and happiness relies on slavery without even ASKING if they WANT it.

Shouldn't the houseelves opinion matter?)

That said, I LOVE this story, and I hope you write more! _

I realize it will most likely move to a political story, but I enjoy those as well.

And there's always the potential wars on the horisont.

I doubt the british people will want war, but the goverment has a bunch of pandering morons -and have lost at least half their staff if all of Voldemort's people have left. Which dumbledore may have filled with his own people.

It's not hard to get people who are morally good in their own eyes to fight. Just claim the enemy is Evil, and they'll jump at the chance.

The cristian Crusaders (who incidentally also raped, pillaged, and on one memorable occasion also resorted to canibalism) is a proof of that.

Then there is the potential discovery from the muggles, which will be more and more likely once London is filled with CCTV in 2000-something, and once the smartphone is invented.

Wizards in the HP books never understand those thing, and wiping someone's mind is useless if they filmed the whole thing and put it on YouTube.

Some muggles will love it, many will want magic themselves then grow envious and agry when they learn they can't, and end up like Petunia, hating it.

MANY will see the gigantic threat in form of memory-wiping, many ways to kill, everyone carryong a weapon, invisibility and so on. And the goverment will be at the top of that list.

Others will look to them to fix everything wrong with the world and cure all diseases -and get pissed off when it won't happen. And refuse to accept they just can't, and also have no responsibility to do so.

I think Aethy's Again and Again have a pretty realistic view on how THAT shotstorm will end.

Psychology has shown that humans have not evolved far from cavemen. Even if there's several layers of Culture glacing the top of that cake.

Of course, it won't happen for a good number of years in your timeline.

The other wizarding nations, but mainly dumbledore & co will be the most immediate danger.

And there is still many things he has to do to fix the land.

Then there is Voldemort's apprenticeship and the struggles HE will face, the general strulle anyone have with running the goverment, and Harry's relationship with Voldemort with two nomadic, stubborn people moving in together -maybe even a wedding on the horizon-, not to mention I don't know your take on MPreg or any other ways two wizards may have kids.

(I can just IMAGINE the panicked look on Tom's face if Harry was somehow pregnant.

I mean... his own father-figure was horrible to HIM, and he's not exactly father material. But that would just make him want to not be that ass to his own kids, while being terrified of it all the same.)

Then there is all the magical races... I don't know if all merepeople are freshwater creatures, but there also exists Sirens in the HP universe -even if they aren't mentioned in the main book series. And they live in the sea. And differer from merepeople. And the Veela... and what about Dark creatures like Wedeegos?

Wendeego eats human flesh, but they are sentient. (Unlike lethifolds)

And Harry didn't exactly restrict his laws. How will THAT work out? xD

You won't lack for conflicts to keep the story exciting.

(And conflicts are what drives a story.)

And that's without knowing if you plan to take up the challenge of making the story political or not.

(It's tricky to get political stories right. But much like House of Cards shows (tv series, americam version), or Aethy's Again and Again, it can be AMAZING when done right.)

I wonder what your take on it will be, however.

And what will happen next. _

I really hope you plan to write more.