Thinking of Tavish as a Merc/Doctor always makes me think of that old doctor from Nami's island in One Piece. Except younger and with sleeves hahaha. Great story

When i search for smut fanfics on Google my search phrase lines up with chapter 1 where the main character is playing around with his dick slider

While I might not have 100% agreed with how the overall plot for this turned out… I’m glad to see that you ultimately had fun with your writing. Take Care!

FINALLY someone choose fighter istg. its always mage because „ItS mAgIc!“ or rogue

Omg xD that "you gave swanky a glock" "swanky be strapped" bit had me dying xD i actually pictured winky saying that instead

Not a fan of this "nerf" situation. Either the system "had" to update and he gets nerfed, temporal at least or he power games and he gets nerfed as well.

too many flash backs

This entire story so far is "and then my OC was epic and cool and awesome and got all the best things!" Repeated in a loop ad nauseam.
Also, the MC went from 10 strength to over 600 in functionally no time flat while also mot focusing on doing such. Being awed by a strength of 2000 is like being awed that someone else has been working at your job two weeks longer than you.

Not entirely sure, but I think Parthenon should be Pantheon. Parthenon means "Temple of the virgin goddess". Pantheon means "of all gods".

The Fireflies were one of my absolute favorite abilities from Black Ops 3.

Rouge should be Rogue

"Is their skill books" should be "Are there skill books".

bro is probably really wishing he had like, an inter-dimensional comm system set up for when he gets sudden rep boosts and new perks from them while he's off World Hopping.

This story had potential, but it lost me at flashback flashback flashback IF YOU WANT SOMETHING IN THE STORY PUT IT IN NORMALLY JESUS CHRIST

Ah a Psychopathic warlord type pokemon? I am guessing that his type is weak to Bullshit.