love it please continue

I enjoyed reading this because it was kind of funny. but I thought the main characters powers were growing too fast. honestly I can care less if he becomes overpowered as long as there's a decent sense of humor in the story.

doesn't doom eternal suit just look cool. as there are much better power suits in science fiction functionally than the doom eternal suit. like the iron Man suit or the halo games Spartan suits.

loving it and can't wait for more

The Slayer is a Primevil. The same as Davoth. Although being a Primevil before Davoth, you would need to beat up everyone to gain power. A.k.a. beat everyone to gain XP.

Which means it's not "A" Doomslayer, it's "THE" Doomslayer. He's not a race.

And yes. Doomguy was already a Primevil. The Divinity machine just gave him XP. TONS of XP.

Also this would also mean that you could have used Doomguy. Get him killed by the Icon and restart. Since Primevil's CAN'T DIE except if it's from another Primevil or a being with a higher power. (A.k.a. T H E Big G. Yes, Davoth created a multiverse, but not an Omniverse)

Great job so far only one bit of criticism it's a little fast paced and by the time they get to cannon he will be extremely overpowered

I want to see RIP AND TEAR on those titans if not I would be very disappointint

Seems legit enough.

...I really wanna see him throw the female titan, annie would piss herself

great job on the story can't wait for the next chapter