Reviews for Last Shot
lucel18 chapter 1 . 10/30/2018
Cuuute! Love it! Thank you!
Bridgy chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
I was grinning ear to ear while reading this. I really enjoyed this short story. It was so CUTE! And the writing is good :) I giggled a lot and made time pass by quickly. Keep it up *thumbs up*
BTW this is Bridget :P
tasuki.miaka chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
i love your story!

haha.. nice ending. :]
Hikitsulover-818 chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
lol its so cute
Ayjah chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Very sweet though I am parial to the anime pairing this story does convince me a little :)
Tatacolt chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Such an exellent story. It just made me happy for one evening (keep writing and I would read all of your stories)! Thank you.
reesha chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
I love it. Good description there. I really felt my throt tighten. good job. it;s short and sweet.
Otaku Mom chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Excellent! I never did figure out why Miaka preferred Tamahome to Hotohori...other than the fact he rescued her in the beginning. How could anyone not fall in love with such a kind, sweet and regal personage. sweet love, the way it should have been

I love Nuriko's characterization in this story. I can definitely see him being the way you portrayed him. This is a perfect one shot.
missay chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
It's so cute! i luv it!
Dani Meows chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
Yea! A miaka with who she should have fallen in love with fic! :-)
MitsukiShiroi chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Omigod that was soo sweet I want more! Sequel! Sequal!
Yusagi chapter 1 . 4/19/2005 sweet...makes me want to cry...

I SO longed for a scene like this in FY...if only there could have been...

and please. please. please. Never Never NEVER make a Hoto/Houki fic! ONLY H/M! *to the end!*

toki.the.mistress.of.snow chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Such a great one-shot! loved it!
Nozomi02 chapter 1 . 10/13/2004
Very cute! And written exceptionally well, as I've come to expect from you. Excellent job!
ladihouki chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
aw, that was so sweet. hehehe, nuriko sure is sly. you know, i really hate miaka! i love hotohori though! could i possibly persuade you into writing a hoto/houki fic? that would really be awesome, you do such a better job at writing than me. i think they are so sweet together but when we see them together in the anime there's something missing, they are so prim & proper, i'd love for someone to write about their courtship & i think you'd be the perfect person for the job! well just a thought...
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