Reviews for The Alpha of the North |
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![]() ![]() Yeah I put up with it as long as I could. But the she-dragon marrying the wolf-lord, nope don't see it. Maybe her and the dragon-wolf but that's it. |
![]() ![]() Please write update this amazing story I'm to invited now |
![]() ![]() ![]() It been three years... this one is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naming jon Jorah was a weird choice the while point is he was naming after his father figure the only other Jorah i can think if is mormont who meane nothing to Ned |
![]() ![]() ![]() meh let her die in child birth. any southern influence screw over north |
![]() ![]() this was really good. same it's been dropped |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn no more ? too bad , great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter I don't think it needs a rewrite but instead an update. none the less great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() what an amazing story so far please continue, no need for a rewrite .can hardly wait for the next chapters. |
![]() ![]() what a fucked up chapter this was, all 99% of this is great, then the last sentence goes off the rails, geez booby b chill out |
![]() ![]() godswood is in the keep...so no...no fucking peasant from kingslanding is praying there |
![]() ![]() ![]() Esta es una historia que merece ser terminada, por favor actualiza |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, I really hope you come back to this. I've never seen this idea before and I'm enjoying it immensely. Little surprised that Ned didn't break with King Robert after Vis's death, but overall great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting fic... I hope you continue it! |