Reviews for Can Jedi Wear Orange? |
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MarvelMatt chapter 58 . 11/23 After enjoying your YJ:M fic as much as I have so far, I wearily decided to give this a go. I was expecting either an excuse for power-w*nk, or for it to be so ridiculous that I dropped it quickly. I've torn through it in less than 24 hours. This is brilliance in every chapter. Naruto and Jiraiya mesh far better into the world of Star Wars than I thought possible. The OCs you've created fit perfectly and don't feel out of place, and your introduction of the Force and Chakra together is explained perfectly, allowing both to be made of use. My single criticism is that there isn't more to read. Bring on the next chapter! |
yaroslavbro12 chapter 58 . 10/31 Perfect |
FENIXHY chapter 58 . 10/15 Excellent chapter, please continue the story, it's amazing |
kgarz01 chapter 54 . 10/6 All the best astromechs are either committing war crimes or contemplating committing war crimes. |
WeAreLegion55 chapter 58 . 10/2 Finally caught up, and it has been a blast. Love where the story is headed. Got a question though, will you be breaking this down into different "Books" since this story is for the Republic will the next be for the Empire? Or is it too early to say. |
TheSlySage chapter 57 . 9/30 ... i see what you did there. lol Han. i can imagine a different Han Solo raised by Rex and the crew lol |
TheSlySage chapter 51 . 9/30 would love to see an alloy of Beskar and Chakra steel. just saying |
TheSlySage chapter 48 . 9/29 if you want a badass larger ship for Naruto later aka a moving fortress? google "No Man's Sky Pirate freighter" yeah... its my favorite ship in the game mine's an S Class and they are Capital Class Freighters. you can store about 6 extra Starfighters inside the hangar and you have you'r moving base inside of it. and you can of course customize the heck out of it. my hyperdrive can go like 45k lightyears distance, massive storage bays, atmosphere gas material purifiers and tons of crafting stations. you can't land these ships on planet, they just sit in orbit and you use them for the increased travel benefits and use your starship from orbit |
TheSlySage chapter 47 . 9/29 naruto is 6 ft tall? all the clones/commandos are 6 ft tall so if naruto stands eye to eye with em he's 6 ft lol and he's not done growing which suits canon as Naruto gets pretty dang tall later on |
TheSlySage chapter 47 . 9/29 i wish at at least one of the two lived. Corde dies in canon but Sabe actually outlives Padme in canon lol this is au so that's not relevant but i still wish at least one of them lived |
TheSlySage chapter 46 . 9/29 additional note on the commandos specifically the Kaminoan's have less strict brainwashing on them than say a standard clone. the alpha's are even less strict but they actually have some independence comparatively speaking lol loved the helljump. surprisingly Naruto seemed to forget he could... just seal his helm away? lol |
TheSlySage chapter 46 . 9/29 additional note on the commandos specifically the Kaminoan's have less strict brainwashing on them than say a standard clone. the alpha's are even less strict but they actually have some independence comparatively speaking lol |
TheSlySage chapter 44 . 9/29 i love R2D2's code thoughts. looks soo in line with what you'd think his thoughts visually look like lol |
TheSlySage chapter 44 . 9/29 oooohh idea! when the war starts Naruto could get a commando armor set or a commando inspired upgrade to his anbu gear similar to how Kenobi wears some pieces of clone commander gear. it could be black with orange accents lol I can imagine Naruto asking the commando's about their gear and incorporating a ton of it, like the repels and the helm. or maybe he creates a hardlight visor that functions on the clones visor operating system lol that way he can link up with their systems and nav/targetting system. |
TheSlySage chapter 43 . 9/29 amusing note, umm astromechs aren't usually welded into the starfighter they can pop and out em like bread in a toaster at least based on the fact the R2D2 typically goes in and out of Ani's ship lol I love Oni tho gives me HK-47 vibes from sw:kotorII lol and again soooo glad to see Delta team. i literally just re-downloaded republic commando last week on steam(its like 2 gb and runs smooth but no controller just mouse and keyboard.) additionally im so glad Mace brought up Naruto's age. lol i've been all over the place and just came back to this fic and was trying to remember how old he was at this point lol but seriously i hope we get a ton more of NarutoDelta Squad. i hope they stick together during the war. when Naruto becomes a knight or whatever promotion he gets I hope they stick him with the commando's as opposed to a standard unit. he's very black ops spec'd anyway for his skill set so they'd vibe all day. Scorch! blow the door, Sev get into that Sniping position, Fixer... take out the lights lol |