Reviews for Can Jedi Wear Orange? |
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InfiniteDragon chapter 57 . 8/11 hMMRP. fLrrrBDAB. Wuzwuz. Gthorp! Incoherent nonsense complete, Cap'n. No, really, spectacular. John Ringo (fiction author) does pretty good scifi space battles and tech, if you want some pointers, but these are... well, WELL DONE. No reason to be nervous about it. It's obvious you put a lot of thought into it, thinking 3d- actually 4d given time- into the whole plan. Excellent execution as well, as always. :) |
FENIXHY chapter 57 . 7/24 Excellent chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one, please continue the story. |
Arbiter3670 chapter 57 . 7/22 This is amazing man hope to see more soon. |
GrandLuminescence chapter 57 . 7/20 Best wishes on your new job! Let that be your focus, no need to worry about being slightly late. |
iFarted1768 chapter 57 . 7/19 It'd be nice if Naruto really showed the clones that they are truly unique by using shadow clones. Show them the difference, how his clones have the exact same skill set and personality, but how each of the clone troops have different skills(things they're better at or not) how they have different opinions(Naruto's clones would all like the same thing, even if they argue with each other). To really show them. Not just tell them or say "in the force y'all different" but literally have proof in seeing truly identical clones and comparing it to themselves(clones who look the same but are very different) Though I have to admit I agree with ponds, Naruto using clones then transforming into clone troopers is a bit creepy |
Jose19 chapter 2 . 7/19 Explanation must be given on the two moons the world of Naruto only has one it doesn’t make sense. |
Jose19 chapter 2 . 7/19 The biggest problem with the pairings is their no attachments rule is a mortal sin to them. Ahsoka is a excellent character for the pairing but there is a important fate for her should thd girl leave the Jedi which in my opinion saved her or stay. There is nothing that can precent the Jedi’s fall everything has been planned for a while. |
Jose19 chapter 1 . 7/19 The deal with chakra compared to the Force will be difficult to explain. Chakra is not the force it operates much differently with less restrictions. Emotions like anger and hate can easily turn a individual to thd darkside, and chakra has no restrictions on using with violence. |
AvatarNo7 chapter 57 . 7/18 Increíble historia 10/10 |
FENIXHY chapter 57 . 7/17 Excellent Chapter I look forward to the next one, the truth is I always want more, please continue the story |
serpentacodex chapter 57 . 7/17 great chapter it's nice to see Jiraya interact with Naruto after such a long time |
NarutoKurai chapter 57 . 7/17 Ok... Apareció Hann... Solo... Hann... Hann Solo... Gran capitulo. |
Guest chapter 57 . 7/16 This is going amazingly |
Tera12 chapter 57 . 7/16 Thank you for your hard work. See ya next time |
M1stymix chapter 57 . 7/16 hmm you could've added Ahsoka reflecting a bit about how atrocious her decision on how to help the boy. Since she could've stayed silent and not try talk to the boy cause what do you think would happen if a civilian child suddenly heard someone talking in their mind of course they would panic also she could've created a safer distraction use the force to make a sound away from the boy or use the earth release or any other jutsu to separate the boy and the droids or distract the droids so boy would run |