hmm you could've added Ahsoka reflecting a bit about how atrocious her decision on how to help the boy. Since she could've stayed silent and not try talk to the boy cause what do you think would happen if a civilian child suddenly heard someone talking in their mind of course they would panic also she could've created a safer distraction use the force to make a sound away from the boy or use the earth release or any other jutsu to separate the boy and the droids or distract the droids so boy would run

Well, Han just joined the great game of "Forcefuckery"

welcome back and thanks for the update!

Good job with the Thrawn scene!

Han...?

Awesome work your doing amazing work

You did phenomenal with the space battle. It's all theoretical so just keep it consistent, no hyperdrive slicing and bs like that, and we'll love it. Unfortunately the side effect of loving it is we crave more

Inconsistent Naruto in name only garbage.
No clones.
Nerfed physical abilities.
Buffed force users.
Buffed random thugs.

Good work on writing Thrawn, I bet writing him is exhausting. As for space warfare, I'd suggest looking up submarine warfare as a basis since it's more similar, just without fighter craft to add into the mix.

Nice entry done to see here. Keep up the good work.

move please

han solo? sweet!

So im confused. Naruto, as a novice carries around prisoner scrolls, but Jiraiya as an expert doesn't?

Great Chapter, i look forward to the rest of them

Looking forward to how this duel with Grievous will turn out, he is rather opportunistic and poses a dangerous situation.

I hope Naruto becomes recognized as a hero of the republic alongside Anakin and Obi-Wan