Rereading

Thanks for writing this story - I'm really enjoying it so far. I love how Harry and Fleur have finally admitted to each other a little about their past histories, though I was hoping that there would be a bit of comparison between the worlds in the actual conversation. Oh well ;)

Just a little note about Elizabeth Bathory, although the generally accepted version of events is that she was a serial killer, there does seem to be some evidence that she might have actually been victim to a highly-successful slander campaign. If you're interested, here's an article about it (I know ff can be a bit funny about external links so I'll put a few extra spaces in)
www. bbc news/ uk-england-cambridgeshire-69057709

Super moment merci pour cette fic !

Just fabulous...The new powerful forms of magic with vivid descriptions are magnificent and there's a perfect balance of action and romance. I still think the final defeat of Voldemort was kind of abrupt and Predictable. The zombie apocalypse part seemed irrlavent to the plot . Also , I would have loved to see Harry move on as Death's Emissiry, even if for a single para at the epilogue... Cheers :)

For all the authors notes, Im just wondering why they got sick from taking a portkey. Both harry and fleur are very familiar with portkeys and wouldnt get sick from taking one.

This Story is really good. I will check out your other Story's.

I never doubted the use of “goodest”, it was spot on ‘pet-speak’.

Wow, you are changing just about _everything_.

Good start, am wondering what you will do with this “old man in a kid’s situation” idea.

And your English seems fine, I didn’t notice any problems.

Such an inspired move to write a Hedwig POV. Bravo!

Harry’s really embracing his de-ageing when he named his anaconda ‘Big Head’, like a toddler would his toy lol

This is a fantastic story, and you are far from the only one who does this, but there is nothing more annoying in all of fanfiction than authors gloating about cliffhangers in their author’s notes.

It destroys all of the suspense you’ve built with your (again, really quite good) writing, and makes readers (1) lose the admiration thry may be developing for the craft you’ve put into creating a suspenseful moment, and (2) carelessabout the resolution.

That massive pet peeve of mine aside, you are an excellent storyteller, and I am very much enjoyinh this work.

I wonder if Harry will ever tell anyone his status with Death? Did he collect all of the Hallows?

Does Harry not know the spell Voldemort used to make the hand for the rat?

well damn...Harry really never catches a break.