Really enjoying the story. Despite a couple issues, overall the story is very good. You do a good job with the characterization. The relationship between Kara and Percy developed well, not too fast but not so slow as to be frustrating. I'm also glad you avoided a lot of the more dramatic relationship tropes.

Nice to see Percy kicking some butt in the last few chapters. I don't have problem with him deciding not to be a DC style super hero, makes a fair amount of sense. I would put him at the upper levels of the Justice league as a combatant, not Superman or GL level, but higher then most of the JL imo. So some of the more damsel like stuff in the story has felt a bit off.

Thanks for sharing your writing.

Didn't like this chapter at all. Its very implausible that random unpowered criminals could take down Percy. If they didn't know he is a demigod, the tasers wouldn't be nearly strong enough to really hurt him. Plus he went through two wars and years of being hunter by monsters. No way random goons are going to be able to sneak up on him. Yes, he kicked their asses when he woke up, but that is how the original fight should have gone as well. So it just feels contrived.

Been enjoying the story so far. I just wanted to say that it felt like a big stretch that when Kara finally decides to follow Percy is when he was going to screw up enough to need to be rescued. Feels really unlikely and a bit contrived, and not really necessary. I guess it does give Kara an excuse to ask him to stop, though its a bit hypocritical. Only a bit though cause Kara is powerful enough that she is rarely in much danger. On the flip side Percy likely isn't in much danger as long as he isn't pushing himself to suicidal levels.

I didn't see when this started. wouldn't have bothered if i onew it was abandoned

Toxic masculinity? So cringe why go throwing in political stuff story ruined dropped.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Love it

Glad that Percy is still willing to kill those that threaten and prevent him from coming back to his loved ones.

Its been a great read, but now its time to wait for next chapters.

I’m loving this, the wholsome dynamic between Kara and Percy is absolutely golden.

A lot of fanfics fall into a pit where they constantly need to have the main couple be dysfunctional. Either through misunderstandings, lack of communication or empathy. Its always so frustrating to see either of the couple completely disregard or ignore the others situation in favour of their own wants/needs.

In this instance both characters understand each others motivations and reason for the things they do. Supporting them, rather than discouraging or downplaying the importance of each others work.
Ahhh, you love to see it.

Also, it’s great to see Percy be put into a situation like this. It shows that he’s not above being caught off guard. It makes sense given the fact he hasn’t faught in a while, and that he’s slowly adjusting to civilian life.

Though he’s still able to kick ass whenever the situation calls for it.

I am enjoying how things are going so far, I hope that continues.

Holy shit you did an amazing job of making the most powerful demigod of all time useless

amazing chapter

Keep it up, awesome as always

Lois and Clark are wrong for this especially since they haven't gave him any information on their friends

It might have been rude but everything he said was true so I don't see why he's feeling guilt and shame. Hell I still think he should be pissed that Lois just decided it was okay to share his business with her friends without his permission and hadn't told him anything about them

I think Alfred as either MI6 or SAS. This means he has no problem with killing if needed.