Just finished all the chapters, thanks for all the novel. It is really interesting take on DXD and all the chapters are very engaging and entertaining.

i wont lie story is great but you teally need to work on your grammer and the wording of the sentances. its honestly really hard to not have it throw you off when its every 2 words

shut the fuck up.

to guest from March 20, shut the fuck up.

yesyesyes1212, I didn't write this to you

to guest from March 20.2025, shut the fuck up.

to Guest, shut the fuck up.

davido747, I didn't write this to you

shut the fuck up

Gave this a second read and well, personally i see the fights and so are more edgy than anything, i know dxd is a boner bait but it didnt mean you should follow your boner and forget to add brain to the characters. A random student came into their school and killed all the strays in 2 weeks and the first thing you do is recruit the guy? They only know him for 2 weeks. But ofcourse hentai rule, anything goes. Including being overly complacent to try and recruit a possible devil hunter.

To realrule, shut the fuck up.

(because can leave one comment but it can't be deleted, I'm writing this the chapter below)(if you add fu hua then please let nothing perverted happen to her (and please let her not have any romance or couple)

(for all chapters(about parts honkai) although I understand the author (add something that you liked and add it to your story (everyone would like to do this (I think so)

(for all chapters) to be honest after adding parts of honkai the plot became more (much) stranger and became a bit incomprehensible (to be honest everything became more complicated after adding parts of honkai)

(for chapter 16 Kyoto, the stage of carnage) about the imaginary tree is completely absurd and nonsense