Para que la historia pueda ser mas larga creo que seria importante que el resto del Imperium se una a la fraccion que habia sido transportada a la galaxia de SW

Es una muy buena historia perp creo que oodroa ser incluso mejor si en vez de solamente uba fraccion del Imperium fiera toda la galaxia de Warhammer

This story has been genuinely incredible thus far. You represent both these sci-fi universes with such rigor and respect that it feels like canon writing. The way they have thus far interacted with each other feels deeply appropriate to the attitudes of the characters in both universes, and on top of all of that you have done the extra work of including your own fan content such as Orion and his chapter, and your own clone and Jedi characters. Great job! I look forward to continuing to read this series, but I had to leave a review when I thought to do so just to express how good the beginning of this story is.

Great opening chapter transferring AFanWithTooMuchTime's work in this format. Good job writing things as accurate as possible.

Strange that none of jedi addressed the issue of attacking imperials first and suggested negotiations. Seems quite out of character.

Uh... some kind of non-canonical shit

...Wait, are you AFanWithTooMuchTime? This story is effectively a 1-to-1 telling of Star Wars vs Warhammer 40K Episode 1: Emperors and Dark Gods. He posted that video back in 2020.

Es muy bueno este fanfic

I think maybe these Astartes might be acting rather heretical, and quite possibly they might be straying, wandering away from the Emperor's path as they have wandered far from their own galaxy. Maybe Big E could pick his gold-plated butt up off the Golden Throne and make his was over to this new galaxy, and he'd be shocked and appalled by what atrocities were being committed in his name.

There's also the matter of this wannabe Emperor what calls himself Darth Sidious. I'd like to see how he fares against the Emperor of Humankind himself, probably get a sound thrashing.

By the Force, it's Echo, one of the Bad Batch and formerly of the 501st Legion. In this fic I don't believe the Imperium forces have good intentions at heart, since they're most firmly aligned against anything non-Human. Sheev Palpatine would love these guys if he weren't a Sith, as he's so fiercely Human chauvinistic. (If only they knew his true nature they'd tear him limb from limb as the worst sort of heretic and traitor to the True Emperor of Humankind.). I only hope the Imperium forces learn from the Jedi what the Emperor truly desires for his race and how to peacefully co-exist with other Xenos races - at least here, in this galaxy, the other races aren't all hell-bent on destroying Humanity. For this to happen, the Imperium of Man will have to forge an alliance with the Galactic Republic, and I think the Jedi and the Grand Army of the Republic will light the way.

The Emperor and the Jedi Protect!

By the end of chapter 2 chapter master orion forgot to address the hidden hydra space mariens a more realistic annoncement would begin with "Brother's of the Sky Watch. Cousins of the Tempered Hands, hidden agent of the hydra,allies of the Astra Militarum and Battlefleet Xektek, it is time for Elucidatio..."

the first half of the chapter is chapter 5 which you put in chapter 9, I hope you can correct this mistake and thanks for the story

nice chapter

very good chapter

Amazing work so far.