Reviews for A Magical Journey
Sahamosveb chapter 176 . 10/22
The author should have said he'd be making a fool of himself with two girls. Why deceive people by pretending to write something sensible and interesting, only to create such a stupid fucking thing?
Sahamosveb chapter 174 . 10/22
Well... Yulle Ball turned out to be a charmingly boring part of this fanfic. Starting with the choice of partner. Fleur, really? The most boring character, the most cliched choice. Why even bother going if the choice of partner was based on "she needs help". I'm not even talking about Fleur's "fooling around" suggestion. The author should have defined who Fleur is. A suffering lady who can't find anyone because of her peculiarity. Or she's fine and has no problem fooling around with a bloke.
Ending with the dance and the 'conversation' with Daphne.
AsclepiusCato chapter 104 . 10/22
"No". What's the point of these deals. He always has to make acquisitions to his requests despite the fact that they owe him. A.I.D isn't a service it's just a friend group at this point considering the fact that their aren't any repercussions to not keeping their word. If they said no ,no. Would he have dared to obliviate them. Honestly this MC has does absolutely nothing. He's on the sidelines gaining power and will for canon's sake fall on his face infront of Voldemort.
Sahamosveb chapter 104 . 10/21
Quinn's too kind. For a man who collects favours like the devil, he collects them like a sucker.
Sahamosveb chapter 3 . 10/20
The author has a problem with the constant repetition of the same word in sentences. They go something like thisQuinn's problem was not a problem that could be solved without problems."
Sahamosveb chapter 3 . 10/20
Chapter 2 "Quinn likes all his classes, for there is no TV and they are extremely easy" Chapter 3 "Quinn doesn't like all his classes, for he is bad at them or they embarrass him". Bro, seriously? Did you forget what you wrote in the previous chapter?
Bilbo10a0 chapter 400 . 10/6
Hmm
The Falling 2725 chapter 439 . 10/2
This has been, without a doubt, one of the best stories I’ve read.
SvenTheDecoy chapter 335 . 9/20
did that idiot just leave witnesses to his wandless abilities?
SvenTheDecoy chapter 306 . 9/20
are you kidding me? jesus, why?
SvenTheDecoy chapter 280 . 9/20
i was really looking forward to reading about his year without any vauly bs...
SvenTheDecoy chapter 187 . 9/19
kinda disappointed that West wouldn't think he's a target. mames him seem really stupid
Azertyup chapter 439 . 9/13
It was the best fanfiction I've ever read all fandoms confounded. I don't have words to describe how much this story moved me. It was marvellous with well thought happenings that I didn't see coming. I'm distraught that this fanfiction is finished and hope you will have inspiration to continue it or write another one.
I understand that you weren't satified with everything, I agree that the Petigrew and Locke situation had a lot of potential but the story is so amazing that their underwhelming end is easely forgotten.
You can be proud of yourself, you did an amazing job of writing this story.

Bravo ! J'espère que tu continuras d'écrire car tu ne peux que t'améliorer !

Avec toute mon admiration,

Laura
lukeanimelover chapter 418 . 9/12
Shit. No… Quinn no… dont… fucking hell… why must you do this to me Author? Why?
Battalion chapter 328 . 9/7
I am so disappointed that this novel ends as a harem. Ugh. I liked Quinn.
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