I’m so confused, why tf is Quinn cutting himself of just to greet people…
Like “oh the new professor isOh sorry, can’t say the last 2 words of the sentence… the door is opening, i need to say hello to these new people and it CANNOT wait the amount of time it takes me to say the last 2 words of this sentence…”
Like that honestly just seems rude asf to the chick who keeps asking him the question lmao.

Ughhh, why do you play with my heart like this…. How can you resist such a fine honey like Fleur?!
And she french?! That just makes her hotter! Anddd she good at magic, not quite Quinn’s equal of course but a powerful witch in her own right…
I just feel I would be much more satisfied with this story if he got with Fleur. Or I mean if he just went with 1 or the other I’d prolly be cool too but idk that’s just me i guess
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Every single time Fleur and Quinn interact it just makes me wish that was the pairing lol.

Everytime you mention Fleur I just get sad that Quinn’s not paired with her

I’m with mr. editor here. This fic should be Quinn x Fleur! Like i get that Fleur’s allure is part of why he calls her beautiful, but she’s like the only one he consistently everytime he see’s her is calling her beautiful. Plus I feel she’s much more his equal when it comes to magic then the other. Plus his mom is from france and shit, easy connections… and I’ve never seen him calling who he ends up with attractive in any of their interactions…?

Bruh I feel like Quinn would have been the perfect character for a Fleur pairing with his background. Plus I’m pretty sure this is the only time I’ve seen him call someone beautiful as soon as he meets them. I mean i guess who ends up with is fine too… kinda weird but fine in the end.

Thank you for a great long story

Whoah whoah whoah Dobby DID WHAT

What's to worry about? if he hadn't made the words, he could have waved and swam away. told them later he was curious about the lake and exploring. boom, job done. he's literally widely known for exploring the castle, it's perfect and merits no further questioning beyond whether he found anything interesting. This is artificially manufactured drama.

What was the point of the muai thai beyond giving him his idea? i mean why have a character learn martial arts? it's like every shitty trope from a decade ago is surfacing in this story. fisticuffs somehow having relevance with a wizard that can reshape reality with a flick of his wrist.

Alternate demension Quinn? Plot? Sin-Quinn from another planet? A secret West? Idk

Well, if hee isn't keeping it, he can at least make sure he can't be tracked by whoever has it. or maybe make it so he can manipulate it, make it show things to the holder that aren't true. that way he can make whoever has it think he is in one place, when he's in another. a much more useful adaptation.

why bother with predtending like it wasn't patently obvious that his old occlumency teacher would be the one? i mean seriously, finishing like that was a big reveal with a cheesy cop drama closing scene? the second i clocked the emotion magic i figured either he'd figure it out or the occlumency teacher was coming back. what other narrative direction could there be?

ok, so he went for his wand. woopdeedoo. he's a wizard. still, nice that he finally noticed a complete change to his personality.

DAw, he could have klepped the whole thing. what a waste. hell, even the shredded eyes could have made for some interesting study.