Reviews for A Magical Journey |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. Wonder if Quinn actually healed Astoria or just transferred her illness to his own self. He is kind of OP, so this might help author setup the clash with the leader of Novellus aconites, since Quinn will be in a sort of weak state. I hope not but it's really hard to imagine Quinn already has the medical skill even when combined with blood magic to fix a disease like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mooooooorrrrrreeeeeee pls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i lovee all the little descriptions of each character you put at the end of every chapter haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story! literally read it all in one day... thank you so so much. your a genius! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stupid concept wasting loads of chapters making him week |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so frickin good! I can't wait for the next chapter but no rush, honestly, I wish JK Rowling could acknowledge this and let this be made into a movie or something, it would be the best movie ever |
![]() ![]() ![]() As a biologist and lover of nature, I have to say I loved the memory sequence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lia's a good sister. What's with the tour? Why just list a series of vacation destination? Why not go into a paragraph or two about each stop? Talk about the different magical cultures? Maybe the difference between the magical and muggle sides? You did with america and japan, which is telling, but why nowhere else? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cores, gah. Pls, no. Cores simply do not make sense the way HP wand wavers use magic. The muscle, or the soul aura explanation makes infinitely more sense. If you had a core, then wizards wouldn't be able to cast spells constantly and only ever get tired when they performed spells noted for their raw power requirements. Spells specifically stated by teachers to be too big for them. Spells that stretch their magical capacity. If you're gonna talk about granpa being suspicious, why end the scene without him being suspicious? Silly quin, complexity is good! You wanna focus on complexity! Like any other mental muscle, it gets easier the more you think about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He really doesn't have to pretend shit. Brilliant kids are not rare. Uncommon, sure, but far from rare, and a great number of child-studies have shown that, when given the chance and treated with seriousness and patience, younger children learn faster. They don't have habits you have to break and are at a point of rapid neural development where you can create good habits with minimal effort. You keep saying antagonizing, when the context should be Agonizing. Agonizing is mental/spiritual pain, antagonizing is being the enemy of someone or something. Being in a magical household is not being the enemy of wandless magic training, but would make the inability to cast painful. Quin, you didn't kill quin, you hit the past-life-protocal button. Stop being emo. Why doesn't he just ask a house-elf for a book from the library? Or to take him to the library and back? Lol, good job on finishing out the chapter with success. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SI awakens on the first use of magic? Not possession. Magic is the light of the soul in like, 4/5 continuities, so that makes it reincarnation. Congratz on recovering your past life memories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unnamed entrance. I guess that means it's the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luna best girl :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rivers knew what he was doing, and because of that, some Aurors or even some members of Novellus Accionites knew who he was. I think you need to fix this sentence. You say no one knows who he is, but this sentence makes it sound like multiple people do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shaiya Arai it's a lot stronger considering that just releasing it freezes miles of region. And just theoretically absolute zero is basically infinite cold. So should be incomparably mire powerful. If Quinn could learn a spell that could just replicate a small amount of it's power it should be stronger than fiendfyre. |