Reviews for A Magical Journey |
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![]() ![]() Just...what the hell is this guy doing exactly? |
![]() ![]() Mc is getting kinda annoying imo. |
![]() ![]() Considering that there are obvious changes in canon, his "knowledge" is not realiable. The marauder map was a shot in the dark. Also... He is officially a second year. He should display knowledge of first year only as he wants to stay kinda lowkey. What is the aid of someone like that worth to the others? The idea seems to not be thought through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read all 106 chapters since yesterday. It was years since I last read this long of a fic in basically a all at once. You kept me hooked for 24 hours basically. You have my respect. Great story. It has it's flaws, but still, worth the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hah . . . . a d20 reference |
![]() ![]() ![]() Under most situations I usually never leave reviews. However, this story is unlike others and demands an exception. I sincerely want to congratulate you on an amazing and enjoyable story, amongst all the many fanfics on this lovely site, yours might become the most memorable I have had the pleasure to read. Therefore, I give you my utmost gratitude and wish you a serendipitous journey. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Okay that contract obviously was not good enough. The fact that he could even be tempted to dive into his mind and steal his secrets shows a serious problem. There is no promise to not simply steal all his knowledge and then act on it himself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was so nicely done. Great job. Awesome way to re-enact the Patronus scene Quinn style. Perfectly in control. The fact that Quinn had already made this backup plan for an eventual crisis is so Quinn that I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The short chaps trigger me a lil but, still a W chap |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I think I right about the colour. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Blue: Sloth Pink: Lust Red: Wrath Yellow: Greed |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder, did anyone reading Harry Potter ever try to hatch chicken egg beneath a toad? Got to say that I often tempted to do so, but still manage to stop myself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, while I usually dislike it when the author include the letter, but in your case I like it. This is because after you include the letter, you also shows us the French letter. I like your take in that. Like how I can make comparison between them. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() D Family |
![]() ![]() ![]() this really good so far, suprised it hasn't had that much attention considering the genre, maybe change the description to include some of the popular searches? |