I dont particularly like the fact that hes not using a wand. But it isnt that much of a problem

He shouldve sent a letter to Alan to ask gor Advice.

Poor Lia. Girls Charisma Stat needs to be leveled uo

Alan is the GOAT. I want to see a Occlumency contest between him against people like Snape, Dumbelldore and Voldemort.

I dont really like MCs name. But other then that, its a pretty average fic so far.

His relationship with Lily is so weird, like why is this chick asking for relationship advice from an eleven year old for snape. Every time they talk Quinn just starts yapping about stuff no one asked for, like the whole muggle studies coversation was weird

Out of all the HP fanfiction I have read, (and I have a crap ton of them), this is by far the best one I have read. Thx for the great and long story.

Gotta admit I don't really go to OC stories like this. But a magical journey has probably been the best HP fanfic I've read in a long time, despite all the faults you pointed out, pls keep writing and making great stories such as this

jesus christ dude ,that was 'dark'

The amount of thought you have put into evey cursed vault and how Quinn thinks through solving them is insane. I have to skim sometimes because my head is continually blown. Amazing job!

LOL I RECOGNIZE THAT
“Whats the greatest magic of all—Chronomacy”
Brillaint refenence to Bandon Lee Mulligan 10/10 im in love. You are one of my people

I read this while it was being uploaded on webnovel its pretty good could be better but its in the upper echelons of the webnovel harry potter fics would recommend 6/10

This was quite enjoyable if quite unstructured fic.

I think more from major relationships would be beneficial in the future. Not really having a post hospital meeting (or much devopemnt at all I'm the final year) was odd.

Okay I skimmed the chapters from the start of the mind control part up to here, but I just can't reconnect with the story. Blatant mind control of this kind kills the story for me, and Quinn keeps holding massive idiot balls when it matters, keeps ignoring warnings when given them, doesn't even try to fully think through things first.
Like sure, not controlling his expression and showing relief at the first chamber of secrets scene? Okay, it's idiotic of him not to practice the emotion part of occlumency, but that's a natural consequence. The whole chamber of sin thing? (and earlier, the first encounter with the frost chamber, which apparently didn't teach him a thing...) That's just plain author-applied, diabolus ex machina enforced via nonsensical idiot balls.
Sorry but this is the end for me. Goodbye

Ugh, I hate mind control plots. Shouldn't his legilimency mostly prevent this?
Also why is he so fucking idiotic when entering the vaults? Cast more diagnostics, examine the place before entering, don't just stand in a marked spot in the middle of the room