Reviews for Her Tale
Manuel chapter 22 . 4/21/2013
No way, wth?
Where's the rest?
Damn it...
John chapter 22 . 4/21/2013

W-w-w-hat's this!?

It's unfinished!?

But it's so close!


Don't just leave it like this!

Mika chapter 11 . 4/20/2013


Oh, dear lord...
Mika chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
I'm starting to love this so much. T_T
wow chapter 22 . 6/7/2012
So it ends here... *sigh* Good work
Tsuppiyo chapter 22 . 12/30/2008

Where's the rest of this fic's material?

Her Tale was so good, it does not deserve to end abruptly!

I COMMAND you continue this.


Tsuppi [formerly from Neoseeker forums]
Marowe chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
You better not be givin' up! You're too good for that!

haha, well I hope you're doing fine anyhow. Just don't let stuff get you down, k?
Naomi Of The Moon chapter 22 . 8/23/2007
You...gave up, huh? You're like me. Please don't be like me. No one knows I exsist on here, and no one sees my story, so I've given up. Maybe if I see something I can say something. I'm sorry. I really am. You're very talented, unlike me. I can't write for shit. I'm so sorry. This's amazing. Damn why am I so stupid? If only I'd come here sooner! Damn! Damn! Oh, I'm probably not helping. I'm sorry. Oh god...
zeek chapter 22 . 6/5/2007
this is the second time I have reviewed. I got to admite every time i read a chapter a 2nd time its more interesting. I can't wait for the next update, you left use with a cliffhanger in chapter 22 and i have been antsy and been waiting for what happens next in chapter 23. I like how you fallowed both story lines of theards of fate and that it told in rue point of view.

this is a perfect story i hope you deside to complete it.

zeek chapter 22 . 5/27/2007
please finish the story its been great no perfect story. i really want to you to finish the story. (you have a real good talent for story makeing you could have a wealthy future as author.)
Loki - TheGrimScreamer chapter 22 . 5/24/2007
I have a terrible feeling you're gonna follow the Mint Story - and ARGH! Cliffhanger! Do you know I was up from 3 this morning re-reading this entire story? (Do you even remember me?) I'm anxious for the Final Battle, for the RuexMintiness. For the rest of the STORY - so come ON!

As for a review? I'm sure you've gotten plenty of praises already. You should know that it's good by now. This portrayal of Rue is certainly different - much more human - and I guiltily admit that I like the angsty side of Rue. I like this Mint, too. In fact, I feel like rstarting my own... Hah! Inspiration! Bloody good show. Can't wait for the next one ;D
Deth Apacolypse chapter 22 . 5/14/2007
I have not given up despite the fact I hardly update. Mostly cause I have more written on paper then I do in the computer *chuckles softly* Actually been working on an actual piece of fiction with my girlfriend. Not anything big but just more for fun.

I like the chapter it's still pretty well written. And of course lovely cliff hanger at the end. Although you need to go and fix your periods/spaces. Its supposed to be two spaces after a period before you continue not one. That way it looks like you are actually taking a pause between thoughts and not just running on.

I'm sorry for not reviewing this chapter earlier I've just had a lot going on IRL (that and Yahoo disabled my email for inactivity again).

I'm sorry your dream fell through for you. It isn't easy to live with the fact something you strive for is something you can no longer do. I know exactly how you feel despite my dream being different.
cookiemania789 chapter 22 . 3/23/2007
Kay: OMG!

Lin: Stop screeching!

Kay: Sorry.

Lin: whatever

Kay: Did yo read that? That was so romantic! Rue is such a gentleman!

Lin: And I say he's a wimp

Kay: gentleman

Lin: wimp

Kay: gentleman

Lin: wimp

Kay: gentleman

Lin: wimp

Kay: gentleman

Lin: wimp

Kay: gentleman

Lin: wimp

Kay: gentleman

Lin: wimp

KAy: This is going nowhere.

Lin: Ha! As if any of our other arguments got anywhere

Kay: Oh and don't give up this story it's fabulous!

Lin: Hey I read that you quit you're dreams on being a writer? Well, why give up now since you're doing a fantastic job at it. So get that lazy bum of yours and start writing!

Kay: Lin! I'm sorry! She just says things without thinking.

Lin: Hey I think!

Kay: just say sorry.

Lin: Ouch! Don't hit me!

Kay: Say it

Lin: Fine...sorry...but I meant what I said!

Kay: Come back here!

Lin If you can catch me!

Kay: I'm really sorry about her. She jsut says things even without thinking and she can really be annoying, you know how little sisters are. They annoy you till the end of time.

but anyway, I'm sorry again for her...attitude. It was a great story though.

Again I'm really sorry.
Rei-chan ASuki chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Hey, Crow. I decided to take a visit and read some One Piece fanfiction, but then I realized that I'd never read Her Tale and decided to go do that. Great story you have here; it's not an opportune time to read (it's 6 AM, I should get to bed), but I'll continue the story later. Mint's scenario is good for laughs and some light fun, but I've always preferred Rue's mainly because of how amazingly introspective it is. Working towards a seemingly impossible goal for years, being disappointed time and time again when so many leads bring you nothing, losing hope but knowing that you'll never give up because of the immense drive you have to reach your goal... you've captured that feeling - along with everything else - very well. It's very similar to Norma's Character Quest in Tales of Legendia, so I think you'd find that portion of the game (which focuses on her search for the Everlight) very interesting. And I've always thought of Pollywogs as being harmless and friendly creatures, but in this story they seem pretty damn scary. _ Anyway, I'll read and review some more chapters later on. I'm not much of a critic, though - I usually just focus on an author or story's strengths - but either way can be useful, right?

*reads on further down*

It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer.

Yeah, well... get bent,
Tsuppi chapter 22 . 1/1/2007
Hmm. Well, I blazed through 4 chapters today, even though I knew finishing 22 meant an end to this reading escapade. It was a great privilege and a lot of fun to read through this story and see ToF in a different way.

Seeing as this was last updated... last year's late September (happy new year), I can only hope and wait. 83 (Too bad the Neoseeker forums'd died down after the War.)
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