Reviews for A Different Fate
Adachi chapter 7 . 6/29/2014
Ok sooo...I made it too chapter 7 before I had to just give up on the fic. While I loved the idea of the first part of the fic it really got lost to me by this point. Add the fact that most of the chapters started turning into notes and well it makes for a frustrating time.

Like I said first 2-3 chapters were great, had me hooked but after reading Naru and Su's behavior it just started getting irritating. I can take characters being occ but there has to be a limit.

Overall: 2 Cabbages out of 5 for the rating and again really only for the first few chapters.
chronodekar chapter 9 . 9/5/2012
I will be BRUTALLY honest. I am feeling personally insulted that I read this.

-chronodekar
chronodekar chapter 8 . 9/5/2012
And now I'm getting really irritated with all the author's notes and earlier chapter snippets. Just needlessly adds to the word count. At a bare minimum at least 50% of a chapter should be story. This does not fit that criteria. :(

-chronodekar
chronodekar chapter 7 . 9/5/2012
I cannot tell if I'm heart-broken on reading this. Or if it's heart-warming. Mixed feelings for me.

-sigh-

-chronodekar
chronodekar chapter 6 . 9/5/2012
... frankly, I'm having trouble figuring out the purpose of this chapter. :(

-chronodekar
chronodekar chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
Errr... O-Kay. I did NOT see THAT one coming.

While I was informed of something along that nature, I ... am just stunned here.

-chronodekar
chronodekar chapter 4 . 9/5/2012
And this chapter was done really nicely. I like it. :)

-chronodekar
chronodekar chapter 3 . 9/5/2012
Right now, I really wish you would just kill that first "one shot" chapter. I remember reading that and abandoning the story.

Then very recently, someone recommended this story to me. I decided to give it another shot. So far, I really liked the scene near the end of this chapter and parts of it's beginning.

-chronodekar
Shade the Bat chapter 9 . 7/13/2010
lol great ending!
GJMEGA chapter 9 . 4/30/2010
Ya know, I understand an authors need for dramatic tension and all, but leaving a story at such a point for nearly six years is pushing it. /Please/ say your going to remove the "Complete" tag and continue this story someday.

Other than the atrocious wait and cliffhanger this is a great story.
Ninja on the Roof chapter 9 . 2/22/2010
Yowza...
karasu337 chapter 9 . 10/14/2009
hehehe...

hahaha...

hohoho...

Roflmao! Fun times indeed.

Emotional roller coaster? With everything that has happened so far, there hasn't been a *really* bad moment, yet, at least. But I almost don't want one to happen.

I guess I'm like Keitaro in that I don't want anyone to get hurt, but knows that someone HAS TO get hurt for the story to properly progress... or do they? I guess the entirety of this whole 'sharing' decision solely relies on Motoko.

Favd, Subd, and going to check out your other stories.
bryant18 chapter 9 . 3/11/2009
i dont like love triangles i like one on one
bryant18 chapter 4 . 3/11/2009
that's a switch in some senses of first chapter but still good
danyman chapter 5 . 8/24/2008
su/shinobu thing is disgusting
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