I'm guessing Artoria's father is Ddraig in this universe?

yes they might be coming but i hope it's not in that order... and grims fr? lol

para cuándo el próximo capítulo porfis está re buena la historia me gusta mucho vuelve a escribir porfis

Ngl, i was very close to dropping this story when you were basically bashing tf outta shirou. Him being able to get one over on someone instead of continuing to be pushed around, barely saved it

noooo, queria mas, por favor continue

After reading all the chapters out at this time, I have to say I am more interested in Rider's new life than in any of the other storylines.

What was the point of the succubus? Just 'i wanna show my OC'?

Hmm... rather than 'treasure', i propose Arturia to label Shirou as her 'Sheath'. what say you?

Umm Chapter 4 is the same as chapter 1? Did the story accidentally displace it?

Yo where did chapter 4 go and why has it been replaced by chapter 1

Why is this chapter a repeat of the prologue?

Thank you for this great story!

I just caught up and I can't wait for more!

It took me until the silver and steel swords to figure out that Garret is Geralt

So far this story is beautifully created. I hope the rest continues to be just as good. A couple ideas to pass on should you care: Shirou as a blacksmith is always a possibility and having golems the very beings of metal teach him some is always an option also, being an incarnation of sword can always be more emphasized conceptually but hey thats up to you. Either way the stories great keep it up please;D

there's an unnecessary ENTER after "berserker", splitting the paragraph in half
Again at "As more swords fl" and at the very end of the omake at "Meanwhile"

Also, THE EAGLE HAS LANDED.