Fun story, enjoyed it quite a bit.

The constant teasing of the Vista fight is setting me up for all the hype so I really hope I'm not gonna be disappointed.

The little slip of Herbert in the Piggot conversation was brilliantly done.

first chapter is skippable

Thanks!

Not much to say. Good job. You did good with this one. Good luck on your future projects. Per Aspera Ad Astra.

Okay. I've been doing suspension of disbelief for some time now, but I have to say just how creepy it is to read about an adult man planning a little girl's life from birth! And the shear disregard for said girl's mother's death, just writting it off as an acceptable loss or something pre-destined and just thinking like oh well, now back to planning a phone alternative since the little girl will uselessly be aversive to phones due to said mother's death, how troublesome! It just rubs me the wrong way how methodical and detached the MC is, although I do get that MC is now far more machine than man so it makes sense in a narrative perspective.

These last two chapters are a heck of a filter for readers, I have to wonder how many get this far then can't push forward. Needless to say, this is as far as I'll be going. The setup was quick and dirty ROB insert fodder, some mildly interesting tech talk filler chapters untill taylor triggers. And then...I'll never know because teen angst and a planetary spanning super computer with a modern human mind as a baseline being a total idiot. *shrugs*

I woukd absolutely have loved to see the far future that would come about as a result of the events of this fic, but I know that can be a slippery slope and all kinda of chaotic. I greatly enjoyed this fic in spite of the many grammatical errors! I suppose those added to the charm of the fic.

Ah yes, let's go meet the Parahuman that KILLED AN ENDBRINGER. Great idea, Jack. XD

Snrk.

I absolutely expected a jovial response from Faerie Queen, lol.

I can see Taylor's reaction now. A combination of annoyance and shock. Heheheh.

HAHAHA! I LOVE THAT! "It's about fucking time, bitch!" Lmaoooooo! Absolutely Amy's Shard, no doubt about it.

Ope...? I wonder what Collateral Damage Barbie wants with Taylor...