Reviews for Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete again) |
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Ceton chapter 42 . 12/25/2024 I don't understand why you care about canon that much? The only fact that wizards exist already fuck over the whole plot line... And really even if Hydra really disapear now you would still have plenty of ennemies in the future. This is Marvel we're talking about here. Personnaly I think it's easier to write about a less powerfull Hydra than a Hydra that knows about magic... And steve or Bucky's role in avenger could replaced by a lot of other heroes. Well in the end it's your choice. Even if the story feels less interesting when the chracters take decisions only for the sake of the PLOT. |
Ole Tessmann chapter 54 . 10/27/2024 He’s 2000 years in the past and the first day hes there hes thinking of getting a job lmao… this is ridiculous |
Ole Tessmann chapter 54 . 10/27/2024 He’s a wizard and actually buys stuff like clothes from muggles in the past lol… |
Ole Tessmann chapter 31 . 10/27/2024 Honestly this story is written so well but the guy doesnt male any sense. He is participating in a muggle war, where he wont actually know if he makes a difference so to speak, he already knows what riddle will turn out to be but still refuses to kill him. A lot of illogical choices |
mockury chapter 10 . 10/25/2024 Man, he gets assaulted and mind raped and he doesn't even have negative feelings for his attacker? Didn't realize you were potraying Gandhi, fucking cringe and dropped. |
Guest chapter 128 . 10/2/2024 good luck to you. |
Guest chapter 126 . 10/2/2024 good story |
Dretnuh chapter 107 . 9/30/2024 You forgot to tell Tilda that you saw her successor in the past too lmao. |
PrimordialNyx chapter 100 . 9/20/2024 If Tatiana's adopted daughter is the ancestor of the Gaunt and Potter families... Doesn't that mean that she was the proginator of the Peverell line? Cause if i remember right isnt that why the Gaunts and Potters had the Stone and the Cloak? they were the decendants of the three brothers and they passed the Hallows down like Heirlooms? |
LordLordyLord chapter 1 . 9/12/2024 Are you alright man? The world isnt that terrible. Life sucks here and there, but not all of it. |
Mav chapter 128 . 8/9/2024 Dont agree with your enforcing the snap. Mason would beat thanos in the first fight. He’s spent his whole life thinking of thanos as the big bad; and he knows that when he fought hela he won through trickery and her underestimating him. He would go after thanos as the full Atharva Joshi. |
Blue-Happens chapter 70 . 8/7/2024 im surprised you're including the eternals in an mcu crossover. i don't hate it, and you handled it well, but the movie itself was... not great. this whole jump to the past arc feels a little strange with how it started. we see his body come back, even with the severed arm and taking care of the dark energy stuff the wound made. so the cut to going back through time feels like a flashback. having a multi chapter long, high detail flashback is odd |
Blue-Happens chapter 31 . 8/5/2024 most of the time, when i read a 100 plus chapter story, the individual chapters are tiny, or it rambles on and on, or its poorly edited. this has the grace( so far) of avoiding these problems entirely. big fan, good luck to the author with whatever their up to these days |
Maverick123214685 chapter 125 . 8/5/2024 Don’t like the idea of the snap happening, feels like you forced it. I don’t see mason losing to thanos. |
DreamRiders chapter 78 . 8/2/2024 Is it Selene? That's the only mutant I know that is a external that needs to absorb life force. |