|Reviews for The Malignant Masquerade
| ZoeyVya chapter 3 . 12/5/2023
It’s likely the Flamel home that is attacked right? That aside: I wonder if the Qilin is with Rigel bit would leak to the British administration and Pansy gets a hold of it… and think Harriet was hinting something all along. XD.
I love Harry’s friends a whole lot. I can’t wait to see how the school year would wound up being and how the narration would continue without the Hogwarts setting.
| 6YERSLEMERANT chapter 1 . 12/5/2023
I love this story and how it develops from book to book is amazing. Not that the 1st book was bad (not at ALL) but what started as an amazing fanfic turned into an amazing story of its own. This is so amazing. I’m re reading it twice this year already, I hope you continue. Even if it’s not completely finished at lead a summary of what happens, please I beg.
That being said; since I cannot even talk about anything because this story is so amazingly layered I’ll have to peal off all the story itself and no one have time for that… let me talk about the outer layer stuff: ships!
Putting aside how amazing it is that this world is a fanfic that has fanfics of its own: alphabetical wise.
Aldon Rosier: I can see it. He’s kind; bit creepy towards Rigel at first but come through as a gentleman but book 4. He is also very accommodating of Harriet. But still not my favourite, he is interesting but not enough as a love interest for Harriet.
Caelum Lestrange: This story is interesting. If this was a fanfic dedicated to romance alone this would have been IT. Caelum makes it so interesting… but, I don’t see him as end game material. If it’s a rich, good looking boy from a dark family we have the boy under this, and he is kinda… not husband material… I like Narcissa a lot more than Bella as a future in-law too.
Draco Malfoy: Actually, I want Draco to be end game when I first read it. Then by book 2 I want them to be just friends and even end up shipping your Draco a bit with your Ginny because that could be such an interesting dynamic. Admittedly, Harriet Malfoy would also be very interesting but at that time of my first read I was baited by Caelum Lesteange. But I found this fan art of Two Malfoys, likely siblings, with Harry’s green eyes and I just… want someone else to see it too even if it means nothing. ( imgres?h236&w236&tbnh225&tbnw225&osm1&hcb1&sourcelens-native&usgAI4_-kTV9tcDdT4k_7CwIA11j7TqpNysgg&imgurlhttps%3A%2F% .com%2F236x%2F9a%2F7a%2F5e% &imgrefurlhttps%3A%2F% .ph%2Fchelestialzy%2Fa%2F&tbnid9aKm4jGZpBfGzM&docidogOW4FITO9tdKM&ved0CAIQ6_UJahcKEwiIo9bG_PiCAxUAAAAAHQAAAAAQEQ) To think about it; Your Draco also have the desired amount of gentleman to make this an imaginable future and enough angst/drama to keep us entertained. My current fav I suppose. anyways. You’re brilliant, I cannot believe you make me like both Malfoy and Snape. Your awesome.
Leonel Hurst: Perfect Gentleman and likely how the story would end. Now I’m not going to beat around the ‘their age!’ bush like many do (as if Harriet wouldn’t be 18/17? One day) just say that even though I have little to no complaints about this character, the ship itself is not… to my… taste(?). 10/10 gentlemen, 1/10 entertaining (IMO,IMO). I like Leo the most in book 4, I don’t know why, I see him more as Harry’s mentor and friend I suppose, I ship Harry with Archie more than I do with Leo… that’s. I don’t ship them at all. But. Yes. Leo is cool. I see Leo as a hero of his own story, a shogun ml… just not quite a shojo or slice of life or suspense ML.
Vampy Friend: LoL. Immortal Harriet researching potions all day. No, since she wouldn’t be able to use magic anymore. But her relationship with the vampire coven is so interesting, I can’t help it. Friend is good, friend is nice.
Putting that aside; I’m so invested in Hannah and Blaise. I wish there was a spin off. Even just a one shot. Because Harry is a potato when it comes to sussing romance. But also, I love the fact that they were there to point out the fact that Harry is dense af and that she is an unreliable narrator even for the dumbest of us all like me who only get the hint from the rest of the story after the second read.
Ahhh anyway, I hope Taiwan is fun, I have a cousin there. Please come back Violet, I beg.
| ADHC chapter 1 . 11/30/2023
Just re-read this amazing story again, I swear it just keeps getting better each re-read. So many fascinating little details.
| imbriumXamo chapter 3 . 11/21/2023
I just finished reading this series for the 4th time. I love it and the day you post another chapter i will call out sick from work to read it.
| Lisa chapter 3 . 11/20/2023
I found this series via a recommendation and have spent the past few days frantically reading it all: I know I should have paced myself more, but it's just so good that I couldn't resist! I can't wait to read more: I'm guessing it was maybe the Flamel's home that was attacked?
| bectouzel1 chapter 3 . 11/11/2023
Just finished my annual re-read of your fabulous universe and each time I find myself amazed at how detailed and rich you’ve made these stories!
I can’t wait for the next instalment!
| Adefina chapter 3 . 11/10/2023
This fic is amazing. I love this concept and everything. I can’t believe you left us at this moment! I’m not saying that in a mean way, but ahhh I need to know what happens after! You are an amazing writer, and even though you haven’t written in over a year, I really hope you continue this someday. Also, I hope everything is going well for you, and I can’t believe what an adventure this has been. Well, I’ll keep this tab open. I hope one day you will be able to keep writing, but please don’t rush yourself. That’s all for now, farewell, and thank you for writing this story.
| From Bora Bora chapter 3 . 10/26/2023
Sometimes, I forget how amazing this series truly is. I come back here to give it a glimpse and find myself rereading the whole thing.
And merlin, I really need an update. It doesn’t even have to be a chapter, just whether or not the story will continue….
I love this so much, and it breaks my heart every time I reach the end to find that it hasn’t been updated in over a year
~Greetings from Bora Bora
| mergirl007 chapter 2 . 10/22/2023
I can’t wait to see Hermione take center stage as the muggleborn healer who solved the Fade. The irony will be delicious!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2023
Rereading and found some typos.
Heir of Rosier was about to stroll blithely though a din of iniquity. Din den of iniquity
Her shoulders hunched and he regrated voicing the thought aloud. Regrated regretted
Draco wanted to shake him until he dropped all his secrets at once instead of dolling them out like an old lady in the park who didn't want the birds to go away.
| chess chapter 3 . 10/12/2023
aaaaaaaaaaahhhh what a journey
All my love
Holy shit I finished it
I'm never on ff so I'm going to try and track down the ao3 thing! God you're awesome and your writing is awesome
| Vejjies chapter 3 . 10/11/2023
This story, with the exception of book 3 (in my opinion), is exceptionally well done. And all I can hope for is that it continues at some point.
| Frenchie chapter 3 . 10/7/2023
I just finished reading (more like devoring as a devoted all my free Time of the week to this task) all of Rigel adventures and I loved them. You managed to make me care about all the characters which is an impressive feast (I ship Caelum and Harry so hard even if I doubt they will end up together... one can dream).
I see that you haven't update in quite some time and I dearly Hope that all is well for you. Even if you drop the story (which would bé sad but it is your choice) could you please make a little note to say you are fine ?
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2023
Please please please update, this is so good, i always take a look to see if there’s been any changes
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/26/2023
Respectfully, if you don't update this story, I'm going to literally die.
This CANNOT be the end... bro please come back. This is incredible and it's going to haunt me for the rest of my life if it doesn't get an ending. Please please please come back and post more.