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![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was so moving! Thank you and a wonderful job, Apprentice Tom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn you and Tom both for this chapter! It was funny, and beautiful, and heartbreaking, and hopeful all at once ... And absolutely the wrong thing to read during a break at the office. Now excuse me, I have to leave this wonderful story to dry tears and wash my face before going back to work... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bob and Alyx? bro |
![]() ![]() ![]() how can Cyrus be dead before his head hit the ground if he landed on his head |
![]() ![]() ![]() On the business of core materials, it is perhaps telling that the (Poor doomed dumbass) Pureblood Supremacist types thought of hunting and going after unicorns almost exclusively. I'm probably being generous when I say "thought", mind you... |
![]() ![]() Yes they should have killed and harvested the basilisk! The call of an adult rooster kills one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I wish that I had a bottle of murtlap potion." I hear you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Danish Oil. 2 lb cut Shellac Typically 3 coats, but it can vary. You can even put shellac over Danish Oil. Tung Oil. I'd try a coat of Polyurethane. Just one. See how it did. Fun read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "takes a very dim view of other people having it," That works for inside the US. Outside is another matter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Drying time of wood is traditionally an inch a year. Mills use Kilns to speed drying to days using pressure and heat. A friend used part of the top of his shop along with a fan to force air trough it and dried rough turned wood blanks in six weeks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Emma should be examined by a good somewhat unprejudiced healer. I assume Harry's firebolt is among the casualties. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Minor complaint was Sirius flashed him before apply the piss de grau. Maybe it made Albus lonelier |
![]() ![]() ![]() The entire story is lovely, but this chapter is awesome. Had me weeping the entire way. I judge my stories by how much emotion they wring from me. This one is way up there. Good weeping. Thanks for giving Neville this gift. Fabulous writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was wonderful. I enjoyed it very much. Now I have to go back through and make note of all your recommendations. I was too caught up on the story to take notes at the time. |