Bloody brilliant. Loved the eye brothers, loved the healers. Very much loved the elves. Shame Dumbles had such an easy end.

Very much loved Frank and Alices day.

I was surprised no-body asked Amos if he wanted the pre-Dunbledore traditions or the massive changes he made from tradition

I’m old with a very young sense of humor. Ping pong balls remind me of captain kangaroo and Mr moose and the ping pong balls raining down.
This story continues excellent
Rock on

Hahahaha. OC has a fixation on Orange Crush hahahaha!
(I shouldn’t talk, my esteem for Dr Pepper borders on worship).
Rock on

My god, the wand making procedure scenes are fascinating!
Seriously. Your imagination must be a playground. That’s a compliment in case it’s unclear.
Rock on!

I'm really enjoying this story thank you for taking your time to write it

A beautiful beautiful chapter! So very well written and flowed wonderfully from one important part of the day to the next. I loved how you wove Colin in throughout capturing their memories for them!

A full-time healer didn't notice Harry has a horcrux, his glasses probably don't match his prescription as they are from a discount bin or that he was starved every summer ?

Shit I'm sorry, my app glitched and opened a completely different story than I was trying to review! Sorry.

Well I'm glad you got busy and didn't write all that. The world sucks enough without that level of angst in fiction. But I hope your life goes well

me encanto, es una historia con un argumento muy original, sin irse por el trillado camino de Harry es un supermago y se gana todo lo que queda de los mortifagos y todos lo adoran, eso aqui no se ve en cambio los superheroes son Amelia y los goblins que tienen un superplan para llevar a la magica bretaña al siglo 21 asi no quieran, y lo logran con mucho esfuerzo en el camino pero lo hacen , y me gusta este Harry que demuestra que no solo es impulsividad bruta sino que puede pensar y tomar buenas desiciones, lastima que ya termino pero puedo releerla cuando quiera gracias, nos leemos en otra historia, bye

No, Harry, Sirius and companies should not have harvested the snake themselves. But they should have offered the Goblins and the Aurors the chance to harvest the snake. It is an issue of training and of limited resources. The second also holds for the wood management you describe. To me vanishing the unused wood is destroying limited resources. The extra wood would at least be usable as firewood, but probably be used for furnishings.

Regards and thank you for the story

So, you publish 30 chapters and in the 31st you all of a sudden decide it would be a good idea to give some translations into American? Why now and not all the times before when you used those words? And if you really felt you had to, why do it in a way that disrupts the flow of reading? Footnotes are a thing, you know?

Jim the unicorn went out in style. What a trooper.

Has no one mentioned the eight million galleons Fudge "donated" to the school? That should take care of a few of the up-front problems. Have read this several times and can't remember if I commented on this or not. Still enjoying the read. Thanks