Reviews for Under That Smile
Chibiusa-chan Minamino chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
This fic is fantastic ! I'm Soujirou's fan just because his smile, the way he hides his feelings. And I love your poem !

And I'm sorry if my english has any fails, I'm a brazilian girl '
Jazzy Uchiha chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
good
Sakura Butterfly chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
i loved it!
chibi-tenken chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
Oh!Not crappy at all!_You should do more like this!
Moongirl chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
That wasen't crappy it was good _
Katrina-chan chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
I really like this poem it's really nice
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
Not bad. I like every verse. How about posting it up at ? People might love it.
Ashes of Butterflies chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Actually, I thought that was pretty good.
hpdigigal chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
OOH! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! I really liked it, I'm dead serious
SSJ Layna chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
This was really good. i loved it. it just went so well with Soujirou and everything. it wasn't crappy at all, trust me. you are a really good writer.
HanyouGohan chapter 1 . 6/21/2003
It is I, Battousai! I am finally back online whoohoo!

NEwayz...it was good, not great, but good (no offence)

Yeah...I like Soujirou too. _ Not as much as Battousai but yeah...

Hey one question: Do you like Aji? Aw he so kewl man! And he has the same voice as Taichi too. It really worked out too.

Did you know Misao's voice is the same as some girl on Medabots? Thats sad...

Ok enough randomness. OO

-Hitokiri Battousai (Yup, the new me!)
Goku-chan chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
Hey! I liked it! This IS the best Sou-chan poem I have read! TRUELY! Good work!

Goku-chan
Decadency chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
Nice, You got real talent, please do more like this.
teh tarik chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
This was NOT in the least bit crappy. It's so perfectly true. You made Soujiro sound really remorseful for all his past actions. It IS good!
Sorceressdestiny chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
! I liked that. It was a nice poem. Though were you following any type of poem or was it free verse? Ne..ne it doesnt matter, the poem was a good one & I dont think that you should change it. Or at least dont take it down. Cause its a good look into Soujirou.

all smirks ;}
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