I loved how he destroyed both his enemies. I am impressed he didn't use the sword. You have the best battle scenes.

Each part of these chapters is exciting

Now that is a murder plot

Great scene.

They must take the attackers apart.

I'll just ignore the hair color in this fic. to me, Daphne is blonde, and Tracey is brunette lol

Responding to a threat Makes him an aggressor? School rules preempt the law? Amelia should at least point out that she could charge them with assault or worse. Amelia is not subject to the school rules.

I know Daphne and Tracey's hair colour isn't really an established fact, but when nearly all of the fanfics involving them have Daphne as a Blonde and Tracey as a Brunette, it's so weird having to picture them with different hair colours when authors decide to be different. So weird that I can't even do it, I just ignore it when it happens.

Ahhh, what a phenomenal story! I love the idea that one simple interaction had such a widespread ripple effect that led to this magnificent story. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity with the world!

Oh god... I don't like black haired Daphne, I prefer blonde but... Blonde Tracey? ... Horrifying

I understand alot is going in but for someone trying to be smart toy would think he would pick up a book

I read this entire story in less than a week. Amazing work!

SPOILER WARNINGI wish croaker hadn’t ended up becoming an enemy in this story, the end of this chapter easily shows how good of an influence he could be in guiding hermione and her need for knowledge. Personal critque, but I wish instead of introducing a lot of additional characters and plot elements so late in the story there had instead been more of a focus on them reforming wizarding society and the MCs and supporting cast growing happily like and extended epilogue, the ending of the story feels rushed because everything happens in conjunction with them still being in school. That all being said, the is my 1st full reread and I do really enjoy the story!

what a surprise, she was right, shocking truly.

why's Harry such a prick to Sirius?

reading these stories makes me glad nobody ever cared if I liked a girl when i was in school.