Reviews for Melting the Ice |
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![]() ![]() I love the story so far. Is it abandoned? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so far. Is it abandoned?if is it I hope you will continue this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A couple of times Daphne said something couldn’t be explained in books but she literally went on to explain them verbally, which is the same kind of data put into books. I think she needs another reason why Hermione won’t find this information in Hogwarts library but there’s no need to work too hard at that. It is obvious that zhogwarts offers a very limited, practical education, the only thing related to general cultural knowledge is History of magic and the course is a joke. Canon Harry is an uneducated tourist and nobody ever says you don’t know X? What are they teaching at Hohwarts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The other question is how people know V is dead? Granted most stories assume the population is sure beyond what is said in canon - two dead people and one baby were in the house, no Voldemort body, how is anyone NOT puzzled about what happened? In some ways i am surprised that the magical world is not more worried about fraud. |
![]() ![]() Fidelius? Floor seven hundred seventy seven |
![]() ![]() ![]() This feels like the end of Act I of this story if that makes sense. Any idea when we get Act II? I really love this story a lot |
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![]() ![]() Great story! I hope your new adventure into parenthood has been fun so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() bruh come back |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am sorry, I have a problem with your summary that just doesn’t make me want to read it. I don’t blame you for pairing Harry with Daphane. That is not the worse pairing out there. I don’t blame you if you are not a fan of Hermione. I don’t need you to be, however I don’t believe that Hermione would truly ignore Harry like your story is suggesting. And it is for that reason that I can’t get into this story. I wish you the best of luck with it though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh man such a good story. im disheartend that it appears abandoned |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've always thought those work arounds for the Fidelius don't make sense, they turn what is described as a terribly complex spell into a minor inconvenience. If Remus isn't the secret keeper I guess Sirius is, then just have Remus give Harry a piece of paper from Sirius like they do in book 5 (In the book Dumbledore is the secret keeper). A piece of paper with the secret written by the secret keeper is the canon way for non-secret keepers to share the hidden information. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione didn't get an O in Divination because dhe dropped it, while she did get one in Muggle Studies because she sat the exam and then decided to drop it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve made it this far, and enjoyed it, though some sections are easier than others. Overall, nicely done. I really wish Harry would give Ron the ass whipping he’s earned. But i think that about nearly all of these stories, including the original, canon work. Ron is an unfaithful ass with mommy issues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this so far. Please update soon! |