I love how you’ve portrayed Cyrus’s reaction to Harry’s claims.

i think its less people don't believe it and more they don't want to believe it. less Hitler and more like Sauron because magic

Awaiting more.

Canon said Voldemort's body was never found. That is concerning, considering magic. Dumbledore really messed up when TBWL'd rumor was born.

Huh, useless Bones (like she was in canon) - she does not make appearence often.
Good work!

Sympa

Brilliant chapter. Although I hate how lowly Lord greengrass thinks of a filthy half blood knowing that Remus was a half blood and helped him in the war. Hopefully in the next chapter with him looking at the reports leads to Sirius getting a trial and that Malfoy paying money for him not being questioned is shown

this useless drama is so boring im just gonna skip this chapter, hopefully the plot continues then.

There are times in conversations where you confused a few months with past year like the current conversation with her father or you could say this past school term to make it easier.. keep up the good work.

I’m wishing youv the best with your studies and university. I think you have a good pacing goijg and I like to read from other characters POV once in a while and not just one you know? I guess this is one of those cases of writers block? Don’t force yourself too much; now I’m no writer but I’ve been on FF long enough to know that if you force yourself to write something it never ends well. So Daphne has some feelings for him.. finally

Chapter 23 (22 prolog) A/N at the end of the chapter: Think about it. That comment is an excellent argument for NEVER posting a story before you have completed it. There is a truth that no one can escape - even Tom Riddle. We ALL are terminal and very few ever get close to knowing when that truth will become fulfilled. Long winded projects with no end in sight discourages continuation of interest both in the reader and the writer. This site is littered with the evidence of such unending projects. NOT A PLESANT THOUGHT!

I feel like some people are just too stupid to understand a scene no matter how you write it. That being said something I notice is that I don’t know if this is exclusive to people that live on the other side of the pond (I’m in the US of A unfortunately) but you tend to say “after alla lot.. just a small nick pick. I like how you are giving two perspective every other chapter.. makes it entertaining and interesting and fresh. I personally don’t care who you “bash” as long as you leave the Weasley twins alone. I can’t wait to what you have in store for Umbridge someone who everyone loves to “hate” for one reason or another that I will never understand.

Euthenasia is illegal in the UK, any Doctor who is found tohave helped a patient die would be stripped of their Medical Licence and jailed

There is absolutely no chemistry between harry and daphne yet.

Well then, we finally got the long awaited meeting with Daphne's father. Talks about a marriage contract, especially with the Malfoys, are something I probably should have expected, considering everything we've seen so far... Curious how mister Unspeakable is so extremely wrong about the Blood curse. If anything, marrying a Muggleborn is more likely to fix the issue than marrying a 'Macally strong's Pureblood. All that inbreeding is a far more likely reason for the curse to persist than bringing in new blood.

But that's not the main issue here at the moment. Once again, loved the letter, and I hope to see some more of them throughout the summer. As for Cyrus... i understand where he's coming from with the contract, but I don't see how he, as an Unspeakable, believes Malfoy or any of the others were under the Imperious and are actually not at all secretly Death Eaters unless he himself is one as well, which the entire history with Sirius should probably negate. If he was a secret Death Eater he wouldn't be as afraid of them as he is I think...
Then again, he can just be a sympathizer...
It's also strange for him to not believe Harry. He's an Unspeakable, he has access to far more information (prophesy, hello?) than most people even in the Ministry, and he cooks literally ask for a memory or Veritaserum questioning as proof...

Definitely the kind of chapter I was hoping for with a proper introduction to Lord Greengrass, and i am definitely interested to see the rest, as always.

Greetings,
Azentra