Reviews for Melting the Ice
Luq707 chapter 36 . 12/8/2023
Congratulations! Can’t wait for the next chapter! Best of luck!
Luq707 chapter 16 . 12/8/2023
Still enjoying this; quick thing thoughdon’t reveal too much in A/Ns! The suspense brings the story to another level!
Luq707 chapter 13 . 12/8/2023
Just reading along here. Not bad. But for me personally, I would strongly recommend to follow the books rather than the movies. Enjoying it otherwise, though. Best of luck!
Sujeeth chapter 35 . 12/4/2023
Binged it within a span of 24 hours and now im sad there’s isn’t more to read. Absolutely loved it and i cannot wait for next update. I was worried that I’ve basically read every decent Haphne fics out there and boy im glad i found this just when i had almost lost hope. The writing is very good with hardly any mistakes and the character development is just marvellous, not to mention the chemistry between Harry and Daphne and pretty much every interaction that took place in this fic. Waiting for more eagerly!
Fourthsubset66 chapter 1 . 11/17/2023
So I don't know whats going on but I. cant see chapter 35 anywhere. i got the notification that you updated the fic but it just wont load
Azentra chapter 36 . 11/16/2023
Welcome back! I almost missed this one because of the fucked up notifications, but I'm very glad I managed to see it in the end. My apologies it took so long.

Congrats on your Bachelor and on the upcoming baby! That is great news on both ends!

I re-read a couple of the earlier chapters to get fully back into the story, and I noticed something I didn't realize before. Daphne is actually only a few weeks at most older than Harry in this story, considering we're already in July and Daphne's birthday is in a few weeks (so we're getting a birthday party chapter right? XD). Which also got me thinking about Harry's Heirship ring and such, and how that would work... I'm curious to see that one in effect.

I figured you were going in the direction of Cyrus teaching Harry about the Pureblood social etiquettes and norms and such, which makes a lot of sense with how the story has been going, and is definitely something Harry needs to learn.

It's good to see Harry and Daphne be able to be and just have normal conversations without fear of interruptions and annoyances around, at least for as long as it lasts (not including Astoria, obviously... The first real interaction between her and Harry is going to be hilarious isn't it? XD)

Now it's time for Harry and Daphne to start training and to get ready for the real battles, even though they might not want to. That, and Harry is going to need some time and support to get over his current trauma of course, which you're doing a great job at showing in small little conversation pieces and thoughts from his end.

One thing I wanted to mention though. Wouldn't Daphne remain the Heir/Heiress once she's 17 until the day Cyrus either dies or abdicates/retires from his role as Lord Greengrass? She only becomes Lady Greengrass once Cyrus is no longer the Lord I think.

All in all, absolutely great stuff as always and I hope to see another update soon, though obviously your real life stuff us far more important right now (and I need to keep a closer eye on the updates without notifications...)

Greetings,
Azentra
arhanmohamed17 chapter 1 . 11/6/2023
hmmmmmmmmm next time remember to lock the entrance harry
Scott.James chapter 35 . 11/5/2023
Great story so far. Looking forward to seeing more
death390 chapter 36 . 10/29/2023
Multiple congratulations on your irl events
arata7kasuga chapter 24 . 10/25/2023
and she does t see why she should care if he has motivation to do well or not?
arata7kasuga chapter 24 . 10/25/2023
so does she not want him to win, and possibly die because of not doing so?
Cipher301 chapter 36 . 10/24/2023
Imma need some more updates please XD
Freudentraene chapter 36 . 10/24/2023
I finally got around to reading this new chapter (after managing to load it in the first place - the technical problems on this site are really getting out of hand) and it was great! I especially liked how Harry and Daphne were able to have fun together again, in their own special way, and it was great to see Harry's determination too. I hope he can achieve his goals with Daphne's support and with her by his side, just as she can achieve hers with Harry's support and with him by her side. I look forward to the next chapter and wish you all the best in your personal life, because what you've told us sounds very eventful (positively eventful)!
dolph25 chapter 36 . 10/24/2023
Congratulations on your upcoming baby!
Romedov chapter 36 . 10/23/2023
This is amazing! Congratulations on the pregnancy! It must be terrific. Good luck with that though. I hear it is often trying.
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