Reviews for Melting the Ice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I happy is end the friendship with weasley and granger is suposse is forever |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazingly written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it thus far |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is such a good story. keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great great work, especially with the disappointment rather than anger. |
![]() ![]() Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 赫敏还有机会赎回自己,罗恩不可能了,他可以去死,消失,留级,辍学,我不在乎。 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the most satisfying chapters I've ever read about a dance, thanks for the update:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() no this was very sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeeeeeeeeeeeesssssss, finallyyyyyyyyyyyy! Oh this was almost everything I hoped for and more and I absolutely loved it. First the outfits, which are wonderful and fit perfectly (nice combination with Daphne's dress and Harry's eyes) Then Cho, which was an interesting turn that I did not expect at all, but appreciated immensely. The ball itself was mostly sweet and nice and wonderful, with some interesting interruptions. Hermione being forced to face her mistakes and reflecting on that is a great start to some possible redemption from her side, which is good to see. Ginny was... Unexpected, though looking back at it and the rest of this story, it shouldn't have come as a surprise at all (I mean, Daphne LITERALLY said it would happen during the ball in an earlier chapter). Then the nicest and sweetest ending to their 'date-not-date-thing' with the kiss, before we go into the actual confrontations. I just love Fred and George not giving the slightest fuck and just congratulating Harry and supporting him no questions asked. Ron being Ron, no surprises there, and Hermione of all people confronting Ginny and in the process complimenting Daphne was very nice. And then that very ending with Daphne's Patronus and her jealousy over Harry's 'friend' who he's going to be staying with over the summer, very nice touch. As to things I was expecting to see but didn't (and don't take this the wrong way, it was still absolutely amazing and wonderful). I don't know why, but especially after that Cho moment I was expecting a moment between Harry and Cedric, but that could be just me. My main thing was that I expected a bit more of a confrontation with the Slytherins, especially Malfoy, and knowing Malfoy maybe even more openly, though I suppose both of those can still very much happen in future chapters. And I will admit to being pleasantly surprised with Snape's behavior there. He might be biased against Harry, but because of such a bias, an action like this is what a proper teacher/head of house should do. Aaaaaaaand I ended up rambling for way too long again... Sorry about that, or not :') Greetings, and obviously eager for more, Azentra |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you forgot rabaston and Rudolphus lestragne, they also attacked Neville's parents |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excelente capítulo! De los mejores que leído sobre el baile de navidad. Apoyo totalmente tu idea de un desarrollo lento de la relación, y me encanta la personalidad que les estás dando a Harry y, sobre todo, a Daphne, como también la dinámica en su relación. Con ansias esperando el siguiente capítulo. Saludos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that the kiss and the confrontation are perfect the way you've shown them. It'd be too soon for the relationship to begin with how the story has been going and the kiss would ruin the slowburn. I find Snape's reaction cliché, though. I somehow find the end of the golden trio satisfying. Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best chapter ever! Keep up the amazing work! |