So this observent Slytherin just walked past the corpse of a thousand year old XXXXX beast to approach Harry Potter and didn't notice it laying there, rotting away, collecting dust. Impressive.

I have read a few fics with similar story. However, I still like this plot and would like to see where will you take this to.

I lime it

That was an amazing chapter.

It was a very good start, some cool details (like the photograph) that are not that usual and felt very organic.

What I could recommend is not to go too heavy-handed with the "everybody hates Harry" thing, kids can be cruel and teachers can be clueless, but some writers make people almost murder Harry with no consequenses, feels force, plus I think it's more engaging that although Harry feels like everybody hates him, it's more complicated (and nuanced) than that, people are confused, some don't know what to believe, some do hate Harry (and they are louder) and some are quite because liking Harry is not popular at the moment. But that's just me that prefers it that way.

Explore the Remus angle, It's not use nearly as usted It could, I'm a big Remus fan so maybe I'm biased, but you already planted the seeds so I guess it's already on your mind.

I hope you put another chapter soon it's quite interesting story and I look forward to it!

I thought this was a good start for your story. I gladly await your future chapters.

definetly an original intro, looking forward to more

I am very interested in the direction this story may travel. Your first charter has piqued that interest. Please continue with future chapters.

Love it keep them coming

Promising start! Could Daphne have a hidden talent that she could use to help him? Like being a animagus or knowing some form of wandless magic? Please consider it! Thank you and update soon!

Interesting start! Looking forward to more!

Good Start.. will be waiting for an update

It’s a good start. One note though; Parseltongue is the language, a Parselmouth is someone who can speak Parseltongue.

looks good would be awesome if we could get a smarter and better harry potter always love those him and Daphne pairing .. i mean he have so much magic around him to learn yet he never even tries to learn anything its quit the disappointment of ha the harry in cannon hopefully Daphne will fill him in of politics and his own house and his standing and that stuff in the magic community as you kinda guess i really hate cannon harry potter haha xD