Great chapter. There's some sort of issue with this post though, sometimes there are two Lyanna Interludes but one is unreachable or non-existent, sometimes I can't see either one in the chapter list. Anyway, neat to see the army slowly realizing the evidence of their own eyes, that they have a genuine superhuman warrior among them. Very solid prose throughout. Thanks for writing.

Excellent chapter as always

Im annoyed at myself for not knowing there were two new chapters for this story...but now I get to binge two whole chapters

Awesome chapter(s), triggered a full reread and damn does it drive home what an epic you’ve written. I’m not sure you’ll ever get there(not for lack of trying just for how in depth you write vs how much ground there is to cover between then and now) but I can imagine him building a movement and ending slavery, etc

I think chapter 41 is broken. Can you try to reupload?

I loved Lyanna's point of view, and so much progress to the story in the last two chapters. Such a great story.

Doesnt barristan goes against his oath to the maiden every time aerys rapes his wife or he watches aerys does something dishonorable? He clearly views his kingsguard oath as more important than the knighthood oath. Hes just a coward who would rather hide behind his oath than do the right thing even of it costs him his life. I think him meeting steve reminded him of whats right isnt whats easy and him accepting death was his cowardly way of righting the wrongs he commited over the years

Good to see she's finally safe and a bonus she now is bonded to new friend as well, wonder if the warging bond will make Nat grow larger than normal.

Since this is marvel movie characters and not the comics, everyone knows natasha would be completely destroyed by steve in a gight aince she was destroyed by the winter soldier. Some of your arguments just arent good and logical. And while this has nothing to do with your story per se but with the whole game pf theones stpry in general, who tf did Lyanna joust at the tourney of harrenhall? Were they trash jousters? I’ve never jousted so i dont know the intracies that are involved to win but the logic says would be demolished unless theh are the size of brienne of tarth. They are shorter and smaller, have less reach with their arms so the lance should hit them first than the other way around. Havr less strength so itbwould be harder to carry. Everything is screaming at me that lyanna and honestly keladry should lose to any decent jouster.

So, what about the prophecy concerning Cersei Lannister? If Lyanna Stark ends up marrying Robert and becoming his queen consort, does the prophecy go unfulfilled? Also, what about Jon Snow and the propechy about him?

Very impressed with how you wrote Lyanna, just the right balance of childish wanderlust and headstrong teenager, you can easily understand how she would have gotten caught up in rhaegar’s romantic save-the-world bullshit.

Rhaegar on the other hand is very hard to get a grasp on, he seems genuinely shocked about how his plans have fallen through. But more than that, he had no idea that Lyanna was anywhere other than where he sent her which is weird for a supposed Machiavellian schemer like him, you’d think if things had gone completely tits up he’d have some sort of contingency in place so he’d be first with the news.. this suggests someone close has been playing silly-buggers with our dear prince.. varys maybe?

But while all this wasteros stuff is fun and all, what I’m most looking forward to is Steve taking up arms against the slave trade in essos. Really hope that’s the direction we’re heading from here.

Brilliant stuff as usual.

I really hope he doesn’t start wearing playe armor unless you are going to treat it like normal clothes. Normal plate armor makes it hard to move around and is heavy. Which is one of the reasons why the fight last chapter was so hard to read. The onlh thing even slightly believable is the last paragraph of the fight where steve takes him down instantly. Anything before that was just bad writing unless you make it clear before the fight that steve is going in slow motion and treating these people like theg are children

Im assuming steve is holding back, like, a lot? They are wearing armor so they are already slow. I guess im imagining the tv show when they fight and then im imagining how fast and strong steve was during his fight with thanos and i dont see how any of these guys can ladt a second. I get that wouldn’t be excoting to read but when you write the fights a certain way saying how close an attack from selmy is from connecting and rogers just barely dodging without saying that if rogers was even remotely trying the attack would look like it was coming from a child holding an extremely heavy sword; it can be confusing and misleading

“Do you have any parting words for Naerys before you leave?”

Was this story partially written by AI?
Not complaining.
Just curious.

Fantastic work as always. Thank you!