Reviews for Take the Girl |
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Mercwthamouth92 chapter 21 . 12/10 on something mentioned in your pre-chapter author's note: this just developed in the last 5 months. Warner Bros doesn't own RWBY, Viz Media bought the IP on July 5. considering RWBY has a large enough following, it shouldn't be too long until we hear some kind of official confirmation on a new volume, or at least new material. |
Guest chapter 31 . 12/3 Part 32 please please please |
Djflemse chapter 31 . 11/28 Love the story and hope for a new chapter. |
Blue-flamed-ninetails chapter 31 . 11/24 you're updating all my favorite fics! im excited to see some new teachers be pulled into the mold! Cant wait to see how Naruto handles the headmasters too! keep up da good work! |
xangelicsin chapter 31 . 11/24 I have been waiting for a update on this story. Great chapter. Looking forward to more from this story |
Guest chapter 31 . 11/21 Sweet hope you continue been waiting for new Chapters for this good luck |
Slither21 chapter 31 . 11/21 Just binged to this chapter (current atm) Overall solid as usual from neon just had a few small hiccups here and there but nothing too bad. Naruto does seem to rant a lot and has the woe is me but holier than thou speeches. “Ive gone through this this and that and im still not killing you” its a bit obnoxious. But overall good so far. |
Slither21 chapter 16 . 11/21 “Ive been holding back the entire time” I couldnt dry heave harder Bro just stood there and dud nothing tf you mean hes been holding back he didnt even do anything LOL Assassin is probably kali or some shit |
Slither21 chapter 14 . 11/21 I was glad he standing up for himself until he became unbearably cringe Every oc so far has been annoying |
Slither21 chapter 13 . 11/21 Shit feels so inorganic. Literally meets woman. Woman jumps into his lap. Come on man. Where did she get the idea of him having chindren with multiple women. Nothing he said suggested that. Also loving how you make canon characters OCs to serve a harem trope. |
Slither21 chapter 12 . 11/21 Lol everyones summary is like Broken in some way and then ann is just oh the consequences of her actions woe is her |
Slither21 chapter 12 . 11/21 Wow this myth is so crazy - the opinion if the man that is the reincarnation if the ninja gods son AKA ninja jesus who is also part alien. But nah this myth is sooooo crazy |
Slither21 chapter 10 . 11/21 An is the definition of a mary sue. Its kinda crazy. Like the other girls have their flaws but here she is, op semblence that lets her match naruto for a few moments and everyone folds in conversations with her. Ive been wondering why shes been my least liked character so far despite being the first one introduced, found the reason. Also how the hell did she fall originally if she has this op semblance, because surely she wouldve killed at least one grimm then scaled from there. Also o7 nora i guess |
N2 chapter 31 . 11/17 Please continue. |
martinezzhilario10 chapter 31 . 11/16 chapter 32nd? |