Reviews for Take the Girl
Mysterious Gamer X chapter 1 . 6/25/2021
So Raven took Yang, got killed, summoned Naruto before dying, Yang is a Maiden, and Naruto is a dad now…please continue this. I’m curious to see what kind of chaos this unleashes
Chaks chapter 1 . 6/25/2021
Ooh, this is interesting. So Raven took Yang from Tai, but the tribe was attacked and wiped out by Tyrian and the grimm, and Tyrian and Raven died, leaving Yang to be raised by Naruto? I don’t think Ive seen this before. Really hoping to see where this goes. Will Yang end up going to Beacon? I wonder what her relationship with Ruby will be like without them growing up together, and Yang being raised by someone else. Im guessing she’s trading her puns for a penchant for pranks? Having a prankster Yang would be awesome, especially if Naruto occasionally breaks into Beacon to go on a pranking spree with her as a type of Father-Daughter bonding lmao, or to start a prank war between each other.
banko54 chapter 1 . 6/25/2021
interesting idea, i wonder where you'll go with this one. either way great work as always.
TheKitsuneLord12 chapter 1 . 6/25/2021
Sad to see Raven most likely die but love the story idea, keep up the good work
Thecodexkeeper chapter 1 . 6/25/2021
Naruto raising a young girl that sets fires when she has temper tantrum’s well it’s a good thing he heals fast
dragoncaller45 chapter 1 . 6/25/2021
Oh absolutely yes!
Side-man chapter 1 . 6/25/2021
Well, this is interesting... I wonder how this will go?
8-bit thief chapter 1 . 6/25/2021
Well, this has every chance of going horribly wrong. For the villains at least. Keep those fingers typing Neon, keep them typing.
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