Reviews for Look, Don't Touch
PINKSAPPHYR chapter 1 . 10/25/2024
I really likes this story. Such a fun and sexy storyline. Very enjoyable read. Thanks a lot for sharing
tff000 chapter 1 . 10/6/2024
good
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 10/6/2024
I really liked this. They really fell for one another upon their first meeting. Both keeping it under wraps for professional reasons. I love how he came back to her with the file folder as an excuse, just in case she said exactly what she said. I also like his persistence and him coming back time and again. She definitely outed herself when he was arresting those two people. I really liked how he got himself out of the third asset and took things with Bella to their next level right there at his shared office. Locked up safely all around, both doors and her, they were explosive together. Clearly they’ll be really happy together. I love the meaning behind his tattoo and how she unknowingly bestowed him with it. Really great. Would absolutely love his version of this. It’d be really sexy. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~ChristyWIX
traceybuie chapter 1 . 10/5/2024
That was a great OS. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Browneyes1970 chapter 1 . 10/5/2024
I loved this one. it was amazing.
Jupiter8339 chapter 1 . 6/4/2023
Read this over and over a million times. I need more from you! you are an excellent writer
Sarai Masen chapter 1 . 8/31/2022
I love this story so much! It's so we'll written and the building tension between Edward and Bella is palpable. When they were finally together was so hoooot!
Great story!
flecour chapter 1 . 8/3/2022
love :)
AnakinSmom chapter 1 . 6/4/2022
Never thought I had a cop fetish...until now! Cold shower time!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2022
Hot and sweet! Lovely, lemony story. Thanks for sharing!
nzjojo chapter 1 . 4/26/2022
That was FAB-U-LOUS! What an amazing story. It's no wonder you won first place - congratulations! I must admit all I want now is a cold shower and... more to read! Thank you so much for sharing your words with us all to read :)
Sarai Masen chapter 1 . 4/24/2022
This story is so good! I felt like I was with Bella in everything she was feeling, every emotion she felt, the thrill of knowing that Edward felt the same way about her!
Hot story too! I loved it!
Sunshine1220 chapter 1 . 4/19/2022
Loved this. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
CrinsomDragon chapter 1 . 2/5/2022
Fire !
KDMCAM chapter 1 . 12/19/2021
I see why this story won so many awards! It was really great! I would love to read anything u added to this one!
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