|Reviews for Graduation|
| XxsTrInGz N' kEyZxX chapter 9 . 7/22/2014
Yatta! FInally. I know it's stupid to not realize the obvious but I guess, it's also bad to assume,. Especially when actions doesn't necessarily mean what it shows
| XxsTrInGz N' kEyZxX chapter 8 . 7/22/2014
Hahaha. He finally admitted that the dress was for her. WHat a coward. He's really rather unlucky that his previous life was not a lady's man
| XxsTrInGz N' kEyZxX chapter 7 . 7/22/2014
I like the idea of the private fashion show.
The marry me scheme sure was classic _
| XxsTrInGz N' kEyZxX chapter 6 . 7/22/2014
This is crazy. I love this chapter :)
| XxsTrInGz N' kEyZxX chapter 3 . 7/22/2014
Kyaa! That was awesome!
| XxsTrInGz N' kEyZxX chapter 2 . 7/22/2014
Who owns the freaking dress? .
| silvermaze18 chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
Beautiful ending :,)
Thank you for this, I enjoyed reading it immensely.
| erieh chapter 10 . 12/4/2012
Oh my gosh, I so love this!
| Phyonnah chapter 10 . 4/12/2012
Awww that was too cute :D
| YamiTami chapter 10 . 1/4/2010
A lot of the times in Eriol/Tomoyo fics Kaho is just omitted completely. Or romance fics in general where there's a canon interest for half of the pairing. It seems they either get erased or are turned into an evil demon. But you had the sense to realize that sometimes it just doesn't work out, there's some hurt feelings but nothing too violent, and then people get over it. That's even rarer that someone who knows what spellcheck is.
I was a little huh through the whole thing about Eriol's reasons for commissioning the dress, but his confession made it all clear and it makes sense. I know I'm being a bit of a one string banjo but it is just really nice to see him so flustered that 'hey make me a dress' is all he could think of as a way to get the door open. And Tomoyo wasn't a pushover about it, which tends to happen with female characters in general. She had the right amount of anger and pout and it's IC that she would forgive him by the time the car got there.
Also the fact that they both kind of know how the other feels but they still need to have a confession. A lot of the times the character has no clue that the other likes them until the confession happens. Not that this is necessarily a bad thing, it can work really well with the right author, but it does get a little boring.
The ending was really sweet, and the number of kids seemed about accurate. It's nice that you didn't forget to mention their classmates, again, a lot of fics tend to do that. Great work!
| YamiTami chapter 5 . 1/4/2010
(BTW I'm from The Muse Bunny)
I've noticed that you don't take your reader's foreknowledge for granted. Meaning you describe the characters as though it was a person's first introduction. Sometimes when someone does this in fandom it can be annoying, since it is to be assumed that the reader already knows the characters and so the info is redundant, but you didn't go too far. It's not so much that it gets annoying for someone who knows the series, but it's enough that someone could read and understand the fic if they've never heard of CCS. Good job on the balance!
The banter between Tomoyo and Eriol works. It feels natural but it has the hint of sophistication that those two would have to have.
And a continuation on Tomoyo actually feeling the crush, because you really carried it off. Expecially that urge of hers to pull some dangerous strings to get this mysterious girl to move away before she finished sewing the dress. And the glimpses we see of Eriol feeling the affects of his crush. Not only does it bring it down to earth, it makes it more sweet. That these two very reserved and collected people would get all flustered over each other (though still in a collected way) makes it clear that they really like each other.
| YamiTami chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Proper spelling and punctuation gets you a definite thumbs up, for starters. Since CCS is a common baby fandom we get so many middle schoolers still gaining their bearings and then once they find them they move on to other fandoms. So it's always nice to see someone who knows what spellcheck is who stayed in the CCS fandom.
This is a good start. Granted, the setup is a little cliche, but it's also something I could see Sakura doing since she's not the type for quiet subtlety. And it's nice to see Tomoyo a little flustered. A lot of the times she stays all calm and in control, and while that's not out of character or anything it's still nice to see her being affected by her crush. Makes it a little more down to earth and believable on a human level.
All in all, a good hook. Because after all, if the first chapter can't hold the reader's interest then it doesn't matter how amazing the rest of it is. While the lead in is an old one it's a solid one, and it can go any number of ways. The curiosity to figure out which way it'll go it's a good carrying force.
*goes off to read more*
| XxxSilencexxX chapter 10 . 2/25/2009
I was surprised that you used 'If You are My Love' as a Graduation ...wala na akong maisip na sasabin so that's ,I'm hungry.
| Hyuuga Princess chapter 10 . 1/29/2009
ALRIGHT! I loved this story thenks for finishing it it was great! LONG LIVE TomoyoXEriol! They are so meant to be together
| Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 10 . 12/25/2008
that was a very beatiful ending! :D