|Reviews for Nocturne|
| Peter Kim chapter 4 . 7/25/2003
I would like to see Cologne secertly train Kaede aginest Shampoo and make Kaede an Amzazan by beating Shampoo and by having Kaede being an Amazan mean Cologne would have an Kaede's father who is very rich and powerful in government/etc circle,Kaede would make a good rival in martial art aginest Shampoo and in martial art and finally it don't matter if Shampoo or Kaede gets Ranma since they are both Amazans and Cologne wins either way,Kaede and shampoo will becomr friends and that would be helpful to Kaede and finally Kaede will teach any Amazan martial art to Ranma. What do Cologne thinks of Ranma as a prize to be won,fond of Ranma,etc?
| Adyen chapter 4 . 7/25/2003
I could have sworn I've read this somewhere else already...
| Fire Lady Aya chapter 3 . 7/22/2003
Wow, I would have never imagined the shadow would be Ukyo! You did an amazing job on this chapter, it was very realistic and its nice to see a more serious side to Ranma. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 3 . 7/22/2003
~I'm glad. Glad to see you're willing to try new things. It's
not a good idea to hold onto something just because it's familiar.~
A reference to Akane? *grin*
I like Nabiki's thoughts on Happosai. They fit pretty well. He's
done worse to people -mostly Ranma- for a lot less so in some
way he had to approve of what they had done to him. Or maybe he
just needed a long nap. *grin*
Kaede is going to have some serious problems as is Ranma
once Cologne finds out she knows the chestnut technique.
I didn't think he was restricted on teaching that one tho'
Ranma usually isn't one to break promises.
All the scenes with Kaori and Kaede were great.
Hell of a surprise ending for the chapter. I was half expecting it to
be Ranko. I was almost positive it was just part of his mind.
I look forward to the next chapter.
| ReDragon37 chapter 3 . 7/21/2003
I'm amazed that you haven't gotten more reviews for this. It's obviously very well written. (Or at least better than what I or many fanfic writers could come up with...)
Hope you can finish it up soon. It's very rare to see a finished fanfic... anywhere.
So, keep up the good work, and see you around!
| nell chapter 3 . 7/21/2003
Wow! Wow! That was spectacular. Your writing is always a joy to read, and that twist at the end of chapter three was absolutely amazing. Keep up the good work!
| Evil's Toughpreacher chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
Another nice story! I must agree that it's a shame so few people reviewed your story, for I have read all of your stories and thought they're nothing short of brilliance. Keep up the nice work!
| TerraEpon chapter 3 . 7/21/2003
It's a shame that so few people review a truly wonderful story like this, and concentrate on all the crap abound. I guess it says something about the attention spans of people on ...
| dogbertcarroll chapter 2 . 7/3/2003
Kaede is looking more and more like a good match
for Ranma. Then again so are the others. Even
Akane is looking a little better, but that seems
to be fear from either loosing Ranma or realizing
that he will hit a girl if pushed far enough. Loved
the interaction between Shampoo and Kaede. I hope
you write quickly. This is a well thought out story.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
I haven't seen much done with Kaori before.
Wow. Ukyou finally spoke up and Kodachi is
in therapy. Things are changing fast.
There are some top notch characterizations
of the cast in this fic. You really give
the reader a feel for how you see the characters
and their motivations.
I would have thought Kaori would have discovered
Ranma's curse already. She has been at Furinken
for a week and has read his medical charts after
"Don't look now, Tendo, but I think I see another
prince making off with your daughter. "
LOL. Great Line.
Genma actually came up with a reasonable line of bull?
It actually sounds like it could be true! Nah! Can't
be. That would be giving him far too much credit.
Hm. Kaeda actually seems like s decent person. That
is pretty unusual in a Ranma Fiancée. A bit single
minded but that's to be expected in a martial artist
of that caliber.
| ariel stormcloud chapter 2 . 7/3/2003
| Fire Lady Aya chapter 2 . 7/3/2003
Wow this is an excellent story! I love how the chapters are so long. When are we going to get some Ranma and Akane action, it seems like she's only in it to beat him up. I'd like to see some more insight into their relationship. Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Kidd2 chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
Okay, I'll be honest here and tell you that I have't read more than a few pages at the time that I write this review. Yet. This is really impressive, and I just wanted to review it before I forgot to do so. I dunno if this is so good because most of the other Ranma fic is pretty bad, or if this is just really good, but heck, this is really good.
I haven't noticed any technical flaws (grammar and whatnot), and the quality of the writing is rather good too. I don't know if you have a beta reader or what, but I'm glad to know that fics with correct grammar and spelling do exist out there.
Every one seems to be in character, which is also a nice change from the AU'ed to hell characters that hardly seem like they were from Ranma in the first place.
In short: I lik it!1! Writ more, plz!1!
| beege chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
I've read the first three chapters of this at Florestic and I have to say that I'm deeply impresed by the depth and quality of your writing. I await the next installment with interest.
| Ginrai chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
I agree wholeheartedly with TerraEpon.
This has been one of my favorite recent Ranma fanfic and I'm glad to see finally see it on .