I wish this didn’t get dropped but im too broke to bribe Shifty to continue… feels bad, man.

Wish this got infinitely more attention than Dungeon of Stone. Just thinking of this with as many chapters as that clump of evil femboy power fantasy, even if it didn’t continue from there and died again, makes me salivate. I’ve been hoping this would get updated for years.

This story is great, I don't think it will get an update has been a few years but there is always a chance. I would read this if you have the time, it has some great ideas. If this story ever does continue I'll be there to read it, I've read what's here 3 times already and I'll probably reread it again.

Choosing Drain instead of anything else was kinda stupid, but considering he couldn’t know the range of any of the options or felt he would need to fight/escape immediately… nah it’s still not a good first pick. All options would be lower-effect to start with, so it would’ve been reasonable to assume Drain needs physical contact, which would have very few applications to him regarding the great cause that is not dying.

No one was on the way to the hospital? No cars, capes, or homeless? Not a single soul? Yeah… no. Even at night, that’s just not how cities are.

Approaching Panacea as a Cape? Why? Also, approaching a hero for healing, not just Panacea, as a civilian would still be a completely viable method (if only for transport/security). Nearly none of them can detect if someone else has powers, and the news that a teen got stabbed in Brockton would only be shocking if he’d been the only one that night. But sure, we’ll assume it was blood loss and he couldn’t think straight. Frustratingly stupid, but a fair reason.

But then… Panacea was touching him as he was telling blatant lies (he made up an entire story) and she didn’t react? Unless this is on purpose and she just really didn’t care enough to call him out on it, that was really stupid of him. Also, SHE WAS TOUCHING HIM. She’s the human equivalent of a biologic scanner, she knew what he looked like better than he did the moment she touched him. And then he says he’d rather de-mask to a stranger instead of her… what? Bro, she’s seen his genetic code, for all intents and purposes he was standing there naked. If it’s on purpose and mentioned in later chapters, sure, could be interesting. Still makes him an idiot though.

Love the premise, gonna keep reading, respect the drive and motivation authors like you have for writing, but this chapter’s sequence of events just cost me some of the few braincells I still have left.

Is there going to be more chapters?

Dishonored ahhhhh system

TFTC! This story is really good, and the relation feel really natural (except for the obvious in natural factor that actually make it flow better). The schedule is sad, for me, but understandable. Question, was Taylor in the library? Can't wait for the next!

Izuku is Mumen Rider?

I wonder who the new player Lung is bringing in is?

I love and hate when characters die, even those that have not had much screen time.
I, however, like it when they are poignant and add to character growth.
I look forward MUCH more of this story and have high hopes you might update it again.
May life find you well.

This shit is ass

continue plsssss

nooo i need more its soo goood

woah what a intoduction so good

Good chap