Reviews for Danger First |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why not have the ninth Take the same name as his processor Dumas |
![]() ![]() How about precog as his hero name. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Todoroki citing the media as a source for heroic behavior is weird. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Expelling Monoma for no real reason. You can't change the casts reaction to Mineta's gag behavior issues, without making Mineta's behavior more realistic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know maybe Mystery for his hero name. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why *sob* why is this so fucking beautiful? T-T Deku is falling up through life (get flexed on by pure Rescue Points, Bakugo), the past users are total crackheads (poor Banjo. Has the coolest Quirk but the rest are hating), Monoma not being an antagonist for 1-A but a team player makes him bizarrely adorable, whatever the fuck is Izuku’s family tree with Inko’s implication as a relative of Nana (his dad is AFO, he, his uncle and his possible grandma/original of his mom (assuming AFO cloned Nana because fuck it why not) are OFA, he drop kicked Tomura who will become AFO and is likely his cousin/nephew, his dad murdered all of his previous Quirk donors (who are basically him now), his mom married the guy that murdered her mom/original copy (?) etc. Holy shit is this a total mess. The sheer insanity has me up at 5 in the morning laughing my ass off and getting noise complaints. Keep up whatever this amazing BS is. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter here, and good job with all the characters. Keep the good writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not gonna lie I hate when people make him all for ones kid but this is hilarious lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would think that Danger Sense would be continuously going off (at least to a certain extent) anytime Midoriya was anywhere near the Support Department (or would it just be Hatsume?). Same goes for any time he's near Nezu (and in this case Danger Sense would probably be right). While "A-17" may seem more appealing than "Strawberry" (and even "Dumas" would be better than "Small Might"), Class B may have the advantage in this instance. "B-17" simply carries a bit more historical weight (in fact being named after the famous "Flying Fortress" heavy bomber of WWII may actually may be appropriate for Bakugo). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter, and pretty close to the last one as well! Kinda hoping the stockpile kicks in during the Sports Festival, it’d be really funny for the twitchy twig to suddenly throw something into low orbit. Also, you been reading With Great Power One Must Go Further Beyond? That’s a pretty good fic, and features Peter Parker-with-AllForOne using Dumas as an alias. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Toru smash. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you considered Instinct or React for the hero name? They both are far enough away from All Might to hide any connections there and both reference what his quirk is supposedly doing. While it would be bad for the rest of the students to give out hints on the mechanics of their quirk like that the sports festival would actually be a good chance to “expose how Izuku’s quirk works” in order to sell the story that it stockpiles and reacts to danger. If the vestiges waited to give him black whip until he was trying to catch someone or move them out of the way it could even help explain that quirk. Even if you don’t use these for the permanent hero name it would make some sense story wise to use them for the sports festival to help set up his cover story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My suggestion for Izuku's hero name, as he will have so many quirks compared to most, is "The Multifaceted Hero: Omnia". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maverick would be a good name for him. Most people like to use it for Nana's hero name, but if you aren't using it for her then I suggest using it for Midoriya. People with the title of Maverick are usually given the because of their firm moral stance and their ingenuity. The definition of MaverickA person who shows independence of thought and action, especially by refusing to adhere to the policies of a group to which he or she belongs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Considering what he named one for all in this story, Risk would make a great name as both a reference to his “quirk” and what it’s acted like so far. |