Reviews for The First Light of Morning
Spartansneverdie312 chapter 1 . 4/22
I love this so much!
Diggin chapter 1 . 10/4/2021
This is nice. Poor Summon dude though
Firehedgehog chapter 1 . 9/1/2021
niice
Terracotta Tortilla chapter 1 . 9/1/2021
Great story. Ignore the whiny guest, they were too cowardly to even make an account.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2021
Man, fuck this garbage. And fuck you for wasting time writing it and wasting my time reading it.
Shadow Sword chapter 1 . 8/2/2021
Beginning of canon halbeard meets Dame Khepri and gets clapped,
Mouse protecter meets and gets HAMmered,
Crusader meets and gets busted,
Gallant changes his name,
Triumph gets shut up,
Uber and Leet complain about nerfing her,
Lung 2nd triggers, still gets rofl stomped and everyone else backs away.
Sebine chapter 1 . 8/2/2021
having not played any dark souls games i dunno what the fuck is going on
laplantpierre chapter 1 . 8/2/2021
This was amazing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2021
A very strange but happy end!

As someone who knows nothing about Dark Souls, this is a wonderfully written fic because my lack of knowledge didn't seem to matter. Maybe I missed some small detail, but it didn't stop me from enjoying the story, or make me feel like I wasn't understanding something. That's pretty hard to do, in my experience, so give yourself a pat on the back.
Sdarian chapter 1 . 7/16/2021
This was pretty neat. Nice job.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2021
Lovely story
The-Black-Prince-Thomas chapter 1 . 7/15/2021
This was a small wonder. Thank you Baked The Author.
Wolfboy1978 chapter 1 . 7/14/2021
A very interesting story, i am not acquainted with Dark Souls, but this felt like a good fit for Post GM Khepri, well done
The One You Feed chapter 1 . 7/14/2021
This is so strange... A hopeful and overall positive interpretation of post-GM Taylor, except she's in Dark Souls. The math seems like it should be VERY wrong, but clearly not, for it has happened. I liked it, for a one-shot. It was sad, sweet, appropriately awesome, and I even got a few chuckles towards the end.
Quatermass chapter 1 . 7/13/2021
Good oneshot, but I have a couple of problems with it.

Firstly, the Darkmoon Knightess is fully aware that Gwyndolin is male, as she calls him 'Master Gwyndolin' as she dies.

Secondly, how did Taylor survive that last bit? Did she become Undead or something?

Otherwise, pretty good.
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