Reviews for The First Light of Morning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so much! |
![]() ![]() This is nice. Poor Summon dude though |
![]() ![]() ![]() niice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Ignore the whiny guest, they were too cowardly to even make an account. |
![]() ![]() Man, fuck this garbage. And fuck you for wasting time writing it and wasting my time reading it. |
![]() ![]() Beginning of canon halbeard meets Dame Khepri and gets clapped, Mouse protecter meets and gets HAMmered, Crusader meets and gets busted, Gallant changes his name, Triumph gets shut up, Uber and Leet complain about nerfing her, Lung 2nd triggers, still gets rofl stomped and everyone else backs away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() having not played any dark souls games i dunno what the fuck is going on |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing. |
![]() ![]() A very strange but happy end! As someone who knows nothing about Dark Souls, this is a wonderfully written fic because my lack of knowledge didn't seem to matter. Maybe I missed some small detail, but it didn't stop me from enjoying the story, or make me feel like I wasn't understanding something. That's pretty hard to do, in my experience, so give yourself a pat on the back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was pretty neat. Nice job. |
![]() ![]() Lovely story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a small wonder. Thank you Baked The Author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting story, i am not acquainted with Dark Souls, but this felt like a good fit for Post GM Khepri, well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so strange... A hopeful and overall positive interpretation of post-GM Taylor, except she's in Dark Souls. The math seems like it should be VERY wrong, but clearly not, for it has happened. I liked it, for a one-shot. It was sad, sweet, appropriately awesome, and I even got a few chuckles towards the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good oneshot, but I have a couple of problems with it. Firstly, the Darkmoon Knightess is fully aware that Gwyndolin is male, as she calls him 'Master Gwyndolin' as she dies. Secondly, how did Taylor survive that last bit? Did she become Undead or something? Otherwise, pretty good. |