Reviews for Scion of the Uzumaki I: Melty Mizukage |
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![]() ![]() Why! I demand a sequel, I don't understand why not fulfill Mei's dream of finally getting married. |
![]() ![]() I would have loved it if the feelings part at the end wasn't a prank. Lol I'm a sap. A perverted sap, that's what. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ATTENTION ALL WANK PHEASANTS This is your King, your Monarch, your Lord, and most importantly, your God. Okay screw that. This is Wanker who went through the trials of hell and lost old account, courtesy of Zuckerburg. You can thank him for this charade. The old account of mine is dead and I'll be publishing all my stories from this new account. So if you're looking for updates (IF I GET THE TIME TO MAAAKE THEM), follow this account right here. This is God Emperor Wanker reviewing my old shitty works and royally fucking off now. (2) |
![]() ![]() You know, it could have worked just as well if the end were not a supposed prank. You know, I would love to see Terumi Mei be a character in a fic where she's not overly sexualized. I mean, she's gorgeous as heck and hot as her kekkei genkai, but all she dreams of is too settle down and be married to a nice man lol I could definitely imagine her falling in love and not just getting horny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() had hoped this would be a feel-good ending, buat this is a smut and the characteristics of Naruto would only contradicts it |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter, even in (most)fanfic's Mei is single/ or death in the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job, the description was very good. Love this pairing, not sure why but I do, though Mei being beautiful probably is part of the reason. Can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() no fruit? |
![]() ![]() ![]() seeing as the title say I; im guessing this is a series and if so I cant wait for the next one |
![]() ![]() great chapter keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah that was cruel of him to joke about marriage with the beautiful Mei-chan ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this. Your descriptive skills are in top form here. Gotta love anytime one of my favorites (Mei Terumi) gets her time in the spotlight (even if it is in a lemon fic). Can't wait for the next part. And please, I beg you, have Samui in this series. I wanna see this Naruto get with the cold, well-endowed Kumo-nin as stories (or even one-shots) with the pairing are rare. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Freaken a that was awesome Glad mei got some Naruto loving Please continue Can’t wait to see whose the next lucky lady in line for Naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soo, the almighty king of wank already gave another blessings trough this story. And I'm really thankful about that. Another day with another story from the king of wank. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As lovely as ever. Seriously, should expect nothing less from you. |