Reviews for That muted sort of longing
Entilzha Ranger chapter 10 . 8/9/2003
I loved that. Your story is so awesome.

Usually, in most stories it seems that right when Harry kisses Ginny everything is perfect, I love how in your story there are still unsolved problems, much like it is in real life.

Update soon!
Serenity55 chapter 10 . 8/9/2003
* wow * that was amazing * i luv ur story * its so unique * its one of a kind * call me a story critic - that is one good story * u know how to write * update fast * ur fans and critics will luv u for it * can u do it every day please * can u make this sory at least 30 chpters long or something? *
LJHPotter chapter 10 . 8/9/2003
Oh my lord, I found this story at Gryffindor Tower, and I just wanted to say how much I LOVE it. You're a very good writer, and I like how you portray post-5 Harry. :)
SansaandWinterfell chapter 10 . 8/9/2003
Yay they kissed now they need to make up!
QueenAnne chapter 10 . 8/9/2003
Wow. Not that I didn't already love this story, but it got so much better. Being the hopelessly violent romantic that I am *laughs* I can understand Harry and Ginny's situation and (having been in a conversation almost exactly like it) I have to wonder if you do too...you sound like you've been through something like that-that's how real the dialogue sounded. Anyway, I adored this chapter, and i hope you'll put the next one up very very soon!
Brekay chapter 10 . 8/9/2003
WOW! I'm speechless. That chapter was just so intense. It was definitely totally unexpected. I could have sworn that after their fight in the last chapter that they wouldn't have 'gotten together' so soon. WOW! That's all I can say. It was amazing.
Alianora Serein chapter 10 . 8/9/2003
That chapter was pretty intense, wow! The development of the characters of Ginny and Harry is the best I have seen and honestly I have never seen such passion in a fight between Harry ad Ginny. I still can't catch my breath. I still feel fascinated.
Brattychick1771 chapter 10 . 8/8/2003
So good! please update soon
Belinde Maline chapter 10 . 8/8/2003
best chapter yet.

looking forward to part ten
XxHypnoticHannahxX chapter 10 . 8/8/2003
excellent story! you capture the characters wonderfully! please continue soon!
Mardia chapter 10 . 8/8/2003
This-oh, this chapter ROCKS!

I'm sorry, I can't really write a coherent review right now. It's really late where I am and I'm practically falling asleep on my keyboard but I just had to say how amazing this all is. Harry went after her(smart boy) and finally admitted how he felt...I have to admit, I wasn't expecting it to happen so soon. They finally kissed...but of course, Ginny HAD to run away...sigh. Still love it.

On another note, I adored the Remus/Tonks interaction in this. They were so CUTE! Just adorable. Squee!

Please, please, please come out with the third chapter quickly. PLEASE?
bee11 chapter 10 . 8/8/2003
Awesome!

You kept me in angst all day long and still doing the same. Excellent, please don't delay with the other chapter, I will die if I don't know what's next pretty soon... UPDATE!
Lourdes chapter 9 . 8/8/2003
I am not reviewing ch9. I am reviewing ch10 that I just read at GT. Wow. What tangled webs does Ginny and Harry put upon themselves. At least with Ron and Hermione, they expressed their love for each other by bickering nonstop. Gin/Harry appears to be quietly explosive and volatile.
misobuttercornramen chapter 2 . 8/8/2003
That was bloody brilliant! I'm serious! I really enjoyed how you blended your story with canon. I liked how Rowling finally turned Ginny into a round character and gave her more of a personality. Her wit and recklessness is quite admirable. Most Ginny and Harry stories have Ginny being really intuitive and shy and quiet, but I believe that she can be quite the extrovert. In a way, in the fifth book it seems that she was pretty much over Harry, but did you catch that comment of Ron's? He said something on the Hogwarts Express back home that made me wonder. When Ginny was discussing her breakup with her boyfriend, Ron said something to Harry that seemed like he wanted Harry to be her boyfriend. Was it just me? Hm, maybe it's foreshadowing what's going to happen in the sixth book.

I caught a small mistake: Aren't sixth years not allowed to do magic? You had Harry put up a ward, but they're still on summer break and only certified wizards can perform magic whenever, right?
Brattychick1771 chapter 9 . 8/8/2003
Please Please Please post the next chapter:)
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